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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Update, update, UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
I'm literally DYING to read what happens in the "Lust" chapters!!!!!!!!
I'm literally DYING to read what happens in the "Lust" chapters!!!!!!!!
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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg. i love this story. i come on this site just to see if you have updated. i cant wait for the next chappy!
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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really liking the story! Keep up the good work!
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing!! I really look forward to your updates, and I just want more : ) Soooo please update soon!
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Come on more more more
ok i'm going to wait like a patience person
that I'M not (because of school), I going to breath in and out to calm
myself because i'm static, What the hell is going to happen?
will they kill each other O_o? will they get through it?
will the others go nutters? O_o I don't know
so please pretty please update soon
take care and take it easy
Lots of Love
Lola
ok i'm going to wait like a patience person
that I'M not (because of school), I going to breath in and out to calm
myself because i'm static, What the hell is going to happen?
will they kill each other O_o? will they get through it?
will the others go nutters? O_o I don't know
so please pretty please update soon
take care and take it easy
Lots of Love
Lola
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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story. Funny, charming, and... tempting. I love how you placed them through the 7 deadly sins. I wonder which one they'll get next?
Can I make a small suggestion? Instead of using the --- for your lines, just put up < hr > (without the spaces.) Using all those --- makes the page longer and a bit harder to read. Not much harder, but a bit. The < hr > makes a nice, long, even line that will fit the page perfectly. Like this:
And it gives you some space between the story and your words. Just a suggestion.
It is a great story. I have it bookmarked so I can easily check for updates.
Can I make a small suggestion? Instead of using the --- for your lines, just put up < hr > (without the spaces.) Using all those --- makes the page longer and a bit harder to read. Not much harder, but a bit. The < hr > makes a nice, long, even line that will fit the page perfectly. Like this:
And it gives you some space between the story and your words. Just a suggestion.
It is a great story. I have it bookmarked so I can easily check for updates.
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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh. Okay, so we've done away with gluttony, sloth, and avarice. That leaves lust (the easiest to remember), rage, shit. Christians make everything so difficult. Bad, good, seven things that'll send you straight to hell... please, who hasn't lusted? I've got to go Google or else I'll go nuts.
Right, so there's lust (I bet that one gets fun.), wrath, envy, and pride. I really like this concept, because it seems pretty original to me. It also does fun things with my brain where I try to figure out why a Christian conceit has made its way into the Magical World. I'm willing to bet that it's not actually an issue in this story, but I still wonder. Gah, brain.
Right, so there's lust (I bet that one gets fun.), wrath, envy, and pride. I really like this concept, because it seems pretty original to me. It also does fun things with my brain where I try to figure out why a Christian conceit has made its way into the Magical World. I'm willing to bet that it's not actually an issue in this story, but I still wonder. Gah, brain.
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January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing. Love the plot and the interactions with the characters who are actually in character. This is so good please continue!
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January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was an awesome dd!! i love this fic soo mcuh!! i can't blieve how funny it is that u know the 7 deadly sin that they are going 2 encounter & u read it knowing that at some point that's what they are experienceing , but its oblivious 2 them.. 2 words for this fic.. Pure Genius!!!
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January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As much as I love the idea behind the story and what little I was able to read, I can not continue. Why? It's a simple thing really, and I don't know quite what causes it, but your story forces me to side scroll just to read a couple words that go off screen. And it doesn't happen in chapter 1..which I found odd. It just breaks the rhythm if someone has to keep moving back and forth like that to read it.