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March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very awesome/original story. Please keep writing more. Wish there was a longer segment to the Lust chapter though, cause that was written verrryy nicely :P
Congrats on getting the main role btw!
Congrats on getting the main role btw!
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow...this is a really intriguing and unique story! i love the idea! please try to update soon, this is too good to leave hanging!
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March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm getting such a kick out of your story! I love it ;) I love that whole exchange between the two of them, and I can't wait to find out what happens next.
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March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I never know where you are going with this one! I LOVE IT! Man, it's almost done? Can't even fathom what the frick is going to happen!
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March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVE this story! But just a bit curious.. R u planning on using any of th new 'sins'? Would b a great way 2 extend th story... Just kidding. I really do love ur story though. It's really original, as someone has stated above, but it's not so different, or close 2 religion, that it becomes wierd. U r pretty much complelled 2 read jst because it is so magnificently different, also love th little 'next episode' thing at th end. Anyway enough of my crazy ramblings & please continue on with ur brilliant work.
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March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry. I put my name in wrong :-S i also wanted to mention that i'm reviewing this from my mobile and so that's why the writing might look so strange :)
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March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ah!this is so interesting. i love coming on and seeing you have updated. are they going to get it on? ;]
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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! I can't believe you left it like that! I was so happy to see an update for this though. I've been wondering what was going to happen. Great update, I can't wait to read more and I hope you update again soon!
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March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter...can't wait to see how you bring humility into it. :D
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March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
**** Ron and Pansy sitting in a tree.... firing Hexs as fast as you can see....**** more to come if this goes the way i think it is....