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for Temptations

by Nikkilicious

schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
See? I knew you'd come around and give us what we wanted!
person Amaya
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Aaronlisa
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story and although a sequel would be great, I think the ending was really well done.
person Tina
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and if you end it here I will love it just the same. I deeply desire for you to continue on with the many adventure that could stem from this story. Sheer brilliance my dear.
person amaya
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved the ending but if you could i would really love to read a sequel. You did seem to answer all the questions in the story itself but then you have the questions that we want anwered. like will they get toghether and if they do (they better) how will it happen. i think that if you did write a sequel that it will turn out great just like 'Temtations' did. you are such a great writter and i can't wait to read more stories from you (if it's the sequel for this one it would make it an even better read).
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A sequel with enough requests/begging eh? Well consider me doing my part in the begging effort. That's right. I skipped requesting and went straight to the begging! LOL I liked the end, but I do think you should do a sequel, only this time have it be about Draco and Hermione building a relationship....jmo. lol Either way thanks for sharing your story!!
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Uh... what do you mean that's the end? There's going to be more, right? Because if not, I'm totally gonna be pissed. Yeah.

I'm glad you got your story back. I'm sorry you had to go through all of that, though.
person blondpierogi
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hello. This story was great... i enjoyed reading it.. you did a great job and the ending was brilliant. Nobody else ever wrote anything similar to what you wrote, especially the ending where Draco decides what to do and to go to Dumbledore... Once again, Great Job!!!
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am begging for a sequel. If you don't wish to write one. I will lol. You ca read it tell me if you like it. But I honestly believe this story has SO much potential to go on within a sequel that you can't leave it here.

I loved the whole journey in reading this.

Thank you.
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well an epilogue would do justice but i think a sequel would too. so i guess an epilogue.