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for Fornicating with the Enemy

by damnedphoenix156

person sanda
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heehee! tell em Harry!
person Jilliane
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice! Frankly, it's about time someone told Molly to back off. Not that I don't like her, but sometimes she's just too smothersome.


And....I have to ask....in Chapter 5....Harry's relief at seeing Severus, you have "....realised he'd almost hugged his most "mated" Professor...." I'm guessing you meant to put most "hated" Professor, but I have to tell you....considering all the Severus slash out there (my own included)........that was a brilliant slip up! I loved it, and if it was intended, I loved it more, cause it was freaking hilarious. I nearly fell off my chair when I read that! Good job! Can't wait to see what comes next.

person alma
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
person Jan
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice chappy! Please update chapter 6 soon. ^_^
person Jilliane
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww...the last bit there with Sirius and Remus crying together over all they've lost was heartbreaking. I'm looking forward to seeing what comes next...how much of a battle it's going to be for Harry and Lucius to maintain their relationship, and I'm dying to know what makes Harry's eyes change colour! Update soon please!




(and thanks so much for the exuberant review you gave me! It was very much appreciated!)
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. Keep up the good work and I will continue reading.
person sanda
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapters
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WAHHHHHH! It was a very sad and touching chapter! Update soon!
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! Please add more soon