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for Of Thwarted Plans

by faithwood

schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Um, uh.... Will there be a sequel where we get to watch as Draco comes up with a plan that Potter doesn't thwart? Where we get to watch Draco fuck him silly, three ways to hell? If begging is what is needed I'm prepared to fall to my knees. *wink* This was good. Really good, I'm happy that you aren't prejudice against Harry and Draco being together. Actually it's more like elited. Who would have thought that voyerism could be so hot? Well I guess I did but damn, I wish I could have watched them both. So will you please consider a second part?

Nikki
MisstressNicole@hotmail.com
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok! Where is the rest? I know there's more. Isn't there? It didn't say one shot! Woo Hoo!
person QueenB
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 1 Oh. My. That was simply beyond hot! It was so clearly laid...I mean described in such exquisite detail that I could practically smell the heat in the air.

I was wondering if Harry were somehow aware that Draco was there. That mirror couldn't have been Harry's idea; he wouldn't have been able to see his own reflection since he was facing in the wrong direction. If he does notice it, he's got to wonder why it would appear.

Please let there be a followup. It can't end at just one chapter, it can't! I'd like to see how Draco deals with Harry's behavior. I know he won't let Harry's outburst simply slide; he'll confront the Gryffindor about it. Harry may be flustered but then he'll demand to know why Draco was watching, why he didn't show himself, whether he got his jollies out of it all.

Gryffindors are brave and Harry might have no trouble cumming...I mean COMING clean! Since Draco is the one in denial about his sexuality, that would definitely give Harry the advantage in any confrontation.

Please write more! :P~~~~
person TimeFlys
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!!! lol poor Draco. Did Harry have this planned all along? Did he know that Draco went there to wank? It makes me wonder if Harry ever caught Draco and wanted to return the fav. I really hope you do another chapter to this. Good Job.
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was hot! Please continue!
person gloria
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha...that was funny! really interesting idea! it might have been even better if harry had been alerted to draco's presence, but that ending was really funny. good job!
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh sexy!