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If Draco's plans have always been jeopardized by Harry, he should take some actions, e.g. take some plans into action and make some amendments according to Harry's reaction...would he carry out this soon???

oh so cute!

Actually I can provide an interesting argument against Blaise...though the room can give us what we want, but...can a human be produced by magic? And can the one and only invisibility cloak be summoned? Please update soon! And...remember to tell us Harry's idea and his unspeakable kinky ideas!

omg! lol beautiful i love your style of writing....also if we were to jump into dracos head...i dare say he might sound just like that! lol cant wait for an update

Ch. 2 Hahahahaha! I haven't read most of the HP novels so I'm not altogether certain about how this mystical room works (although it sounds like it could put most interior designers out of work). Can it really conjure people? But it is kinda funny, when you think about it. Poor Draco!

Ch. 2 Night the Storyteller has a point. Can the Room conjure up live people? Not that Draco actually touched Harry so maybe it was a really great illusion. And how does Draco know about the Invisibility Cloak in the first place? Should we just accept that he does?

I don't think this is a problem that should be resolved in only three chapters. I know you want Harry and Draco to get sexually passionate with each other. But if Harry is really angry at his kidnapping and the false impression Draco has about him, then maybe he should let the Slytherin stew for a bit. I wouldn't mind a little more exposition before the raunchy sex. I like emotional content with my stories. Not that I mind hot, pounding sex. :D

Holy shit! Now that was a twist! Didn't expect that! Leave it to Draco to have the best wank fantasy, cuz that first chapter was delicious! Looking forward to the ending!

oh god oh god oh god, my poor poor baby. Why did you do that to my Draco? He didn't deserve that. He's just head over heels for Harry. *sigh* not nice. For your own sake, I hope you'll make up for that disaster. *glares evilly but pouts at the same time - what makes her look quite ridiculous*

love the story i'm on the edge of my seat!! can't wait to read the next instillment. was it really harry or all in draco's head????????

keep on keeping on !!

Excellent! Will there be more? Or was this just a one-shot? It was very funny at the end! Poor Draco...trust Harry to ruin everything for Draco....haha.