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for Fire Call

by fbowden

person nsal
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy your stories a lot! I think you're a wonderfully gifted writer and "Fire Call" is one of may favorites! Please update soon! I cant wait to find out what happens with Severus and Sirius in the same rooM!!
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahaha! I was rolling with laughter the entire time! they truly are the cutest couple ever! and the sex scene was great as usual! OOOO! But im excited to see Sirius! Cant wait for your next update!
person Jilliane
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Really, Flic, I'm running out of words to describe how freaking fabulous this story is!

I love Severus' snarky banter with Harry, and Harry's playfulness. You just do this SO well! Again, I'm literally green with envy at HOW well you do this! I laughed, I "awww-ed"...Severus, while being his usual caustic self was also quite sweet. And the 'L'eau Lubricus" tub scene!!! The commando-climax at the Arc du Triomphe scene!!! Harry's Birthday Potion scene!!! Hot, hot HOT!!

This chapter was SO satisfyingly long, so sweet, so well written, SO worth the wait, that I don't even mind the "cliffie"!

Still, having said that, I hope it won't be too long before we get to hear Sev's scathing comments on the prospect of Siriusness. :D

person Jilliane
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Awww, Severus remembered after all! How sweet. I can't wait to see what he's got planned for Harry in Paris. Maybe a little birthday celebration at the top of the Eiffel Tower? Or in a dark corner of the Louvre? (remembering the Millenium Wheel). I so love it when you have Severus venturing out among the Muggles. Hilariously funny stuff! Update soon please!
person Nikte
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH, how can you make Severus seem so cute when he can be so cold? I justlove the way you describe him, he is just the SEXIEST BASTARD ever, I really enjoy your story, so I
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, it's so good.
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love how sweet s and h are in this fic. but not so sweet that i get sick or bored reading it. just the right amount of angst and conflict. such a good, interesting read.
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, this story is amazing and i can't wait to read more! i do hope that you will update soon....
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! I absolutely love this fic!
person Jilliane
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh! YAY!!! *does happy dance*


I'm so glad you updated! I just LOVE this story!


This chapter was just as well written and humourous as all the others, and the way you wrote Severus, dealing with Muggle London, his jealousy at Harry with the footballers, all of it was fabulous! And the scene over the desk! Baby, it's HOT in here! Your writing is fantastic, so descriptive and screamingly funny! Please update again SOON!