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started this story yesterday

this is an amazing story and i hope you will continue it =]

wow.... i knew it!! Rita is up to no good. I really like to see her plan really work. Oh please make Rita and Molly's plan work. Molly became more sinister i think. am afraid she will end up in madam Pomfrey special ward if she keep up her evilness. Contrary t Rita skeeter she became the victim the more this story progress. anyway... keep up the good work!!! i am waiting for the update. Is there any way that i can be notified if the next chapter is updated???

Oh my. I had to check this category one last time before heading to bed and I see this. Not having the discipline to just say I'll read it tomorrow, I am so far past my bedtime I'm in trouble tomorrow morning....oops it is tomorrow morning. So glad to see a new chap and do you think you could have thrown anything else into this chock full chap? Wow. Now we're on edge waiting on the next one to see what in the world is going to happen now. Well, what can I say other than anxiously waiting for your next great update.

Nice to see the beta changes i made implemented. :D Hope you have the next chapter ready soon. :) Keep up the good work.

So glad to see this story here rather than abandoning it. You have to know you have taken a 'universe' and made it your own with this story and done it with good writing skills, creative story line and tenacity to stick with it. I look forward to the next update.... I'm sure you've got something cooking with Molly....hehehe

Excellent story Edmond. :) Too bad you stopped posting this on PK, hope you'll keep posting this on ff.net as well as here. :)

very glad you updated this fantastic story