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June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This just keeps getting better and better. I can' wait to see what Harry and Hermione have in store for Rita. Nothing can possibly be BAD enough for her. Great Job. :-)
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June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying your continuation of this story as much as the original. I would suggest using a beta. Some of your sentences need a little work for grammar and structure. But I love it anyways.
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May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know your probably sick of hearing it, but another great chapter... :D I am interested to see the fight between Molly and Hermione now. Wondering what magic Molly will be able to use from Grindewald's book and wondering about your view on power vs magic...
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May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
They do seem rather too eager to just obliviate, rather than try to actually solve the problem. Are there no squib psychologists in your world?
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the story; Thanks for writing.
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man, what a long chapter. Good it was though...,Lol! Yoda's so quotable. If you do quote Yoda again make sure that you claim no ownership of him.
Hm, most post Voldemort stories aren't that good, but this one is good. This Mewtwo wishes to see the next chapter soon.
Hm, most post Voldemort stories aren't that good, but this one is good. This Mewtwo wishes to see the next chapter soon.
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh what a wonderful treat today to see you have posted an update. I had wondered if other things had caught your fancy, so I was so glad to see an update on Rebirth. I suppose it will still be another chap or 2 before we get to Thanksgiving..... so come on and get that whip cracking to get the next chap up asap.
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was an excellent chapter my friend, that twist with Gridelwald's book certainly surprised me and Rae. Nice job. :D It really sucks that you got kicked from Portkey because of one short-sighted bitchy person.
Patiently awaiting your next update. :)
Patiently awaiting your next update. :)
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is even better than your Triangle Disease story. Hmmmm, looks like Molly is going to cause trouble for our favorite couple. Where's that Farrit anyway? This Mewtwo wants to see chapter 19 soon.
BTW, the version that your story is sequel to is also found at http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3186836/1/Vox_Corporis. I know some may still be bitter about the NC-17 band, but it looks like the "M" rating over there is being pushed to its limits.
BTW, the version that your story is sequel to is also found at http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3186836/1/Vox_Corporis. I know some may still be bitter about the NC-17 band, but it looks like the "M" rating over there is being pushed to its limits.
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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't imagine why PK has pulled this story.
intellegent , interesting writing an story.. it makes no sense to me.. what happened, did you not pay this months bribe to the corrupt ministery official?
I will continue to enjoy this story no matter where you post it.
intellegent , interesting writing an story.. it makes no sense to me.. what happened, did you not pay this months bribe to the corrupt ministery official?
I will continue to enjoy this story no matter where you post it.