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Hi. I'm a little confused, as I thought this was a sequel to Vox Corporis.  The changes were from movie to book, as well as the last chapters vs. the new chapters.  Its still a great story as am now in chapter 10/11.

 

Great story so far, thank you.  I'm looking forward to the next installment.  I love the development of Molly's story, your portrayal of Harry and Hermione and the growing story of Ron's quest.

Keep up the lovely work.

Despite the far too sloppy lovey-doveyness, this is a good story and I would appreciate notice of any updates.

Why would Poppy unbind and wake Rowena up?  As the powerful Healer that she is, she would have been more than able to restrain Rowena.  Harry, having absorbed or deflected all Rowena's spells, could have easily restrained her or stupified her wthout causing unnecessary physical damage.  The whole scene was unnecessary.

I am enjoying this story very much and it fits nicely withMissAnthropic's story.  I must tell you though, that you got your latin wrong.  REPROBO VERITAS means REJECT TRUTH.  Loquitur veritatem (Speak only the truth) is probably what you needed.

Regards, Dave.

Can I just say first - wow! I've just finished reading VC and now Rebirth together Very impressed by how you've followed Ann's work, now weaving it into a story of your own crafting. I have accepted that Malfoy and Pomfrey lived (you've also resurrected Hagrid!)> I can't wait now for the fallout fromt he duel and Skeeter's death - great idea to give Skeeter's and Rowena's magic to Neville's parents. I'm not sure how it will help them come out of their states btu look forward to your explanation.
Still tossing up whether Dumbledore is truly good (or maybe just really grey).
Please write more - I look forward to your next installment!
Roisin

Re chapter 88:

I don't really think it's appropriate for the story to have all those magical creatures, given that Harry and Hermione are normal, if spectacular, muggle ones. At the very least it needs some justification.

As a whole it is not a bad story. Though I do have to point out one of my biggest complaints; there are many actions that occur that you give little or no explanation as to why they occur. I.E this section of text

I'm still here following the story =]. Mind you, I'm very disappointed in how seldom u post new chapters. It had actually been so long i had to re-read the whole story to remember the storyline. But I do have to say you have a ton of writing skill, and I'll be checking frequently for new chapters

HI! I'm really enjoying your story, also your work on Black, white an dRed by Barmy Old Codger over on fanfiction.net. Keep up the fantastic work!
It is a shame we can't get alerts when stories are updated on this site, otherwise it is terrific.
Regards,
Roisin