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i for got let sev come to harry for sex that way harry can say he told sev no because-of the consequent like if harry got pregnant are they had sex because he was mourning the lost of his daughter

oh my god, u have to get this updated lol, it's so gdgd, n i love this sneaky Harry.

Boy is Harry sneaky! I love it! I know this sounds bad but I don't want to see Sevvie have two kids. I mean Him and Harry raising both his kids...maybe Caitlin can have a miscarriage...oooh that didn't sound very nice of me to say that huh? Sorry, for wanting that to happen but I feel that even though Harry would deal with Sev's other child civilly because he loves Severus, I also feel that it will be the tear that will get bigger in there relationship as time goes on, and will be the catalyst for them to break up because of passive pent up feelings Harry will either consciously or unconsciously have, because that child will remind him of the time when Sev betrayed his love by impregnating and marrying another woman in the midst of their own relationship. Update soon!! I love it!

I'm soooo thrilled up updated!!! I love this story. Great chapter. Can't wait to read more! MORE!!!!

Why is Severus being so stupid??! Argh.... I hope nothing drastic will go wrong with Harry and his potion.
update!

yes why did he leave harry for his wife that was a good chapter i so been looking forward for a update please up date again sooner oh and last time harry had to gain acertain amount of wait hopefully he doe that after his postions are ready.

I love this devious Harry you've created. Hell hath no fury like 'the-boy-who-lived' scorned!

Can't wait for more.

okay i re rad chapter7 several times and i still say its a good story but how will you take sev awayfrom his perfact wife will she be a spy for voldy are be preg by another man becauses as it stands harry will be a home wracker i hope that sev's wife is actually a bitch and that she using sev for protection from the light and dark side i hope her child is someone else because sev and harry need to be together. pleaseeeeeeeeeeup date soon

I like it. Please update soon.

i love this story. but i don't know who to root for sev and his wife.or harry and his sev.because sev is happy with his wife yet he lust after harry. and harry is in love with sev and to top it off she sweet sickly sweet.and what about harry and his plan to get preg while she preg and who was first harry and sev or sev and his wife are he cheated on both of them at the same time will i still love this story up dated soon pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.