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Yay! Harry's okay! (or will be eventually...heh) I hope the baby's okay.
Great chapter!

Boy? Birl? oohhh...I want to know... :)

Oh my god XDDD
I laughed sooo hard when harry thought "Tell me to push one more time, and I

I really like this story... in fact, I get very excited when you update...but I have to say, the two short filler chapters of Harry's Water Breaking and Harry Giving Birth were disconcerting.
Though they are well written, don't get me wrong, waiting days just to read about the birthing process more than once is a bit disappointing. It makes me wonder if the next chapter will be all about Kreacher cleaning up the mess while Harry sleeps, which is not something I would anticipate for days. If they had been one chapter, I believe it would have been fine, but to get all excited about seeing your story on the top of the list and TWICE have it be short filler... it makes for a sad Adi. It was completely off pace with the rest of your story.
I really hope you get motivated again soon... and that this does not deter you from writing. >.< Again, I do really LOVE this story...
Please don't take this as a flame. It isn't meant as one. I'm trying to help you remember that it's important to maintain readers' interest when you're writing, especially in this kind of forum. Its meant to help (not hurt), I swear. ^^;

YES!!!! The baby is finally here!!!! I'm so happy ^_^

Now I can't wait for Sirius & Remus' reaction to the baby when they get back ^_~
Is Harry going to tell them that Severus is the Father? Is the baby it self going to look like Sev?

I can't wait to find all this out!!!

Please update chapter 21 soon ^_^

Jan

Hi. I have recently been pointed to your fic during a descussion about infidelity fics. It's rather unusual to see Snape married to a woman and being the cheater. I've really longed for a stroy like that. I also wanted to tell you that I liked how you handeled the male pregnancy. I'm not usually a fan of that as I often find it rather hard to believe but I liked the way Harry had to do a lot of work and go to a lot of trouble to make it even possible for him to conceive.
There are a couple of spelling mistakes as well as various words which you used in the wrong context, especially in the earlier chapters. I don't want to clutter this comment with corrections but if you'd like I could look over what you have written so far and send you a corrected version per mail. If you don't already have a beta, that is.
Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter. :D
effi-chan

Oh and by the way, the Black house-elf is called Kreacher.

Yea! Baby time! hmmm...so...hows this gonna go down with no one but the house elf to help with the labor? hmm...

Yay, he is in labor! I wanna know what it will be a girl or a boy!

I can't wait until the next chapter =] The one before had me in suspense about whether or not Snape was behind him or not.I reallly can't wait until Harry has the baby....I wonder how he's going to hide it from Remus and Sirius?