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as always good but i still want snape to realized that he holding his son and can we either kill Caitlin or divorce so they can be together

Harry felt his heart 'sore'- means pain. its spelt soar (flying).

Keep going and rest well. I'm enthusiastic to find out how this will go.
Very exciting.

Don't usually read mpreg stories. Luckily, a clever friend recced this one. Following their predicament is like riding the ultimate emotional trainwreck. I'm apalled with the both of them at this point but remain thoroughly engaged as a reader. I sympathize with the problems you've been having with site formatting. In spite of it, your writing shines. Looking forward to watching S and H dig themselves out of this deep, dark, how-not-to-have-relationship hole, if in fact that digging out is even a possibility at this point. It's okay if that is not your plan. I'm with you and them for the long haul on this hellish express.

I have a feeling that snape won't say anything nice about the baby. I think catilin will be in love with little eras. No woman can resist a baby ^_^

sec is going to realise that its his, isn't he? PLEASE let him realise. why did he marry Cat anyway??

Thank you for updating! ^_^

God I love this story!! I can't wait for Severus to find out about the baby. but I'm sorry I hate the name of the baby cause I hate trying to pronounce it in my head while reading it. Erasmus? ewww. It's different but not something I would have considered in this lifetime. I torn between wanting Severus to find out during the shower and harry having to come clean in front of everyone cuz how is Harry going to take care of the baby while in school. There is no way a new parent who is very attached to their newborn going to be away from their child for extended periods of time. I'm assuming the baby will be with Remus and Sirius while Harry is at school but Harry is going to want to leave school very very often to floo or portkey whatever to Grimmauld to see the baby almost every other day or every few days cause a parents bond to a newborn child is strong. there's no way he can not sneak out almost everyday to see Eras. Thats why I'm thinking it has to be exposed before school starts back or I guess u have some elaborate plan how Erasmus's parentage gets out. Is someone gonna bump off Caitlin so that Severus is free again? or is this going to be a story where Snape stays married cuz caitlin forgives his infidelity and harry and snape have to just be seperate parents to Eras and not a couple? Thanks for taking the time to delete those symbols. Very much appreciated.

Wow! I wonder when Snape's wife will get suspiciousand when Snape is going to acknwledge that Eras is his child. Great chapter can not wait for more

Finally snape! it was a lovely chapter i can understand why harry would be upset he carried that child for nine months and then have someone else claim him that would upset anyone. Even if it was done for good. Ur great, awesome writer!

Awesome chapter. I feel so much for Harry, especially during the shower since he couldn't claim Erasmus as his own.
By the way, did you ever explain what "Erasmus" means?
update!