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Just read ch. 21. Glad to see the baby's finally arrived, but my first thought, honestly, was 'that baby's way to active to be a newborn'. In addition to that, laughing and smiling are both learned behaviors and so newborns don't do them. I do like the story, but unfortunately the newborn thing is something I come across quite often, and truth be told, drives me a bit nuts. I find it very distracting to read about newborns doing things I know they can't do. Other than that I think the chapters good. The symbols are a bit distracting but hopefully whatever problem there is will be fixed. And now I'm going to go back to reading. I want to see the reaction to Erasmus.

Meep... Why must it end WHY I ASK YOU???? Severus is just a bastard and I don't like his wife... Harry shoulda just told him how he felt from the beginning make him feel guilty. Anyhow emial when you update I WANT MORE... gypsy_willow90@hotmail.com

Love this story... What is up with Catilin...she must really be a baad girl. Poor Harry, can't spend enough time with Eras. That baby needs his Daddy!! The Dobby, Kreature fight was cool. Why is Severus not training Harry too? That way Harry will get to see Severus. God! I can't wait for Severus to know about Eras, and finally Him and Harry getting together or whatever they r gonna do. Keep up the awesome work. *bakes loads of cookies and gives them to Author*

Good chapter.

I really like this story, but I feel as if there isn't any Snarry anymore...hopefully you will have some planned soon? =0)

Gods, I hate it when they treat Harry like a child, forbidding him things, making Harry ask for permission, keeping things from him. I wouldn't be able to stand it myself. And I do hope Caitlin turns out to be a spy or something; good riddance and all that. Then Snape can finally get with Harry.

Bah! You know, Eras not being with Harry more when he's so young could seriously mess up the father-son relationship-bond when he's older... poor Harry. Eras is a distraction anyway because Harry's always worried about being away from him... they might as well let him have his son...
As for Severus... I hope there's more of him in the next chapter! :)

PLEASE update soon! The suspense kills me!

Hmm, secrets, secrets!!
What's Severus and Catilin up to?
Little Eras is so adorable!
Great chapter! Keep going!!!

Hmm, I would of thought that Severus would of love to at the very least be able to get a glimpse of Harry just as much as Harry wished too!......Anyway, I loved the fact that his godparents finally took him to his son! So Happy!!! ^_^

Please update chapter 27 soon !_!

Jan

finaly he gets to see his son but not snape! its getting good!