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VIDEO PIMPAGE: Occasionally I make something relatively original available by a donation of choice (Some people send 10 cents. Slicksters. lol. :::shakes head:::) Anyway, I'd like to invite you to take a look at a free low-quality preview of a "Closer" video I made featuring Severus Snape.



This is quite a graphic video, definitely XXX NC-17 but Hermione isn't "technically" in it, because I have reservations about using Emma Watson clips in such a blatantly sexual video because let's face it, she's so young and it can get rather creepy. But there are women in it. Imagination can work wonders. lol. Besides, the focus is on the MAN.



Anyway, here's the link. I hope you like the preview. This thing took forever to make. whew.



DIRECT LINK TO PREVIEW: http://theburningpen.com/clteaser.wvx



DIRECT LINK TO PAGE: http://www.theburningpen.com/closer.htm



As I said, the quality of the preview is low so those with dial-up can view it as well. The uncut version is nice and clear. I have a realmedia version for dial-up viewing as well and the complete video is downloadable. Thanks a lot.

Yay you added more chapters!!!

Now we need more chapters!!!!

LOL I like where this is going ^_^

Just sort of flitering through here... and it occured to me that Ginny might have given Snape a try. She certainly appeared shady when she spoke to Hermione. I hadn't really thought all that much on the Hippogriff comment before. Makes sense, that Ginny would hear about him and want to see him first hand. Maybe letting something out like "Gods... Hermione was right! You are hung like a Hippogriff."

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW is that all? It ended all so suddenly! But it was good and I applaud you effort....well done!

Should i be worried when things in real life remind me of Fanfic, or the other way around? The giddy up comment reminded me of a conversation I had with friends in class tonight. ::walks away muttering about unhealthy obsessions:: Oh well excelent story.

You--you--I... oh My GOD! ROFLMAO! That was absolutely hilarious, and I am jealous that you have as much time as you do to finish your story. I wish I had the time to update my story as often as you do. I say this to say, thank you for what you can give. Oh! and thank your muse on my behalf please. It's an interestingly creative, horny, little muse, isn't it? Anyway! update! Update!!! UPDATE!!!!!

You can be assured that I will never shoot you:-) Thinking of hurting or bribing you sometimes due to the cliffhangers you leave, but never shoot you. Who should then be able to produce the fics you do? I can rant and rave sometimes about some of your fics where I find Severus to be to brutal and Hermione too forgiving, but you will still be one of my favourite authors:-))
I like this story, though I ofcourse want a happy ending where Ron is roasting over an open fire (JKR really made me hate him by pairing him with Hermione in that ridiculous epilogue) while Severus twist Hermione into all kinds of interesting positions while making sure both of them are bonemarrow tired and satisfied afterwards. Bonded to eachother of course, neither should share what are theirs:-))))
Update again soon.

I won't kill you that was great! But you stopped it just before things got REALLY interesting!...LOL Anyway please continue!

Fat appendage? That's a new vernacular; I've never heard you describe his nether head as fat before. You used the term quite frequently in this new chapter, and it gave me a small chuckle each time I saw it. It just sort of paints a whole different picture, perhaps a more realistic one. A

Sorry, just saw the anonymous post about how you "pervert" the characters. It gave me a bit of a titter. If she meant the way fan fiction writers warp/redefine/expand on characters to suit the purposes of their stories, I suppose she has a point.

And if she means the way you manage to imaginatively throw them into a seemingly endless amount of unique sexual situations that never fail to please your readers, then I suppose she has a point there to.

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