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Hello, Ms Figg!

I've been a reader of your work for QUITE a while now, but have never summoned the courage before to review one of your stories.

Not because I haven't wished to, of course, but I have always just been incredibly shy . . . as well as my fear of inadequately expressing my esteem for your talent and tales . . . without sounding horribly "fangirlish" in the process. For that, I most humbly beg your forgiveness.

Now then, on to my review! I enjoyed "Why Just Watch" immensely! If this is your "spin" on PWP One-shots, then I hold out my empty bowl and beg, "More, please!"

It was intense without being 'bogged' down, PERFECTLY our divine Severus, and made me lloooonnnggg to trade places with Hermione MORE than once!

You have a true talent for describing the details of graphic intimate scenes; for that, I'm deeply jealous, as I have to struggle so with mine. Or used to have to struggle, but it's better now that I have such a snarky, pushy, absolutely wonderful beta (who I believe you're acquainted with--Darque Hart?) teasing and pulling very repressed and intimate details from my memories.

If not for reading your work, I'd never have had the courage to actually write my own explicit adult scenes. Thank you for lighting my way in that arena. Please feel free to reply to me, should you so choose, at "vickisckritself@yahoo.com".

Most gratefully and sincerely yours,

Victoria Prince, also a Severphile

that was HOT!!!!!!!!!

Nice PWP. The Ron bit added in there was not quite what I was expecting, but it was all delicious nevertheless.
~M

OMG I HAVE BEEN WAITING SO DAMN LONG FOR THIS... AND I loved it!!!!! Worth the wait. Althought I really do hope you make a sequal cause although awsome ending and great fast read very said it is over. wahhhhhhh. I want more hot Snape Action!!! ><

Wow! An awesome story! I loved it! I can't wait to read more of your stories! Keep them coming!

Your biggest fan,
Tiffany

Whooooooaaaaa, Nellie! (sticking with the cowboy theme here). That was some Seriously Hot Snape Sex.

Ok...so I will preface this review by saying that I am a horrid reviewer and quite often forget...I know, horrible arent I....at any rate I am glad to see this little PWP completed =) its one of my faves....I particularly love the imagery of a whiny Ron rolled onto his side clutching his goods protectively. Course if he'd done it right the first time there would have been no need to wear himself out, would there? Men should be forced to undergo training on how to please a woman...now I know not all women are the same....but still, the basics of reading another's body language or just simply asking "What do you need from me?" would be welcomed...silly silly men and their poor, delicate egos....oh well....anyhow, I love it, it makes me smile when I read it and with Hubby in Iraq anything that makes me smile is a blessing for me.


Happy Writing and many hugs~
SG

Loved it. Especially how Severus was caught in his own trap. Hee!Hee!

still got it girl..lord have mercy!! now for the dark lady, please

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?