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by pittwitch

person tenoh27
schedule January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was wicked! Love the fact that Lucius was in reality manipulated by both Draco and Hermione. Thanks for the super!hot story.
person Clare M
schedule August 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh No!! You cannot leave it like that!!! That is way too hot. If you hadn't thrown the whole thing in at the end about Draco and Hermione knowing about it... but GUH! The whole..... oh my mind is just blurry now.

Please write the next part, this MUST be a three part story. How does Hermione end up bringing Lucius home to Draco in his little outfit? How did she KNOW? Was it that she recognized Severus and the obliviation didn't work then she just figured Lucius must be the white tiger? Did Draco know about his father's little *business*? Oh please tell more... This story was very, very cool and totally unique. The idea of Severus as a Black Panther animagus stripper... just boggles my mind...

Clare
person Lyssander
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!!!!
person magpie79
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Pitt you bad bad girl!!!!
Love it, def worth making the washing wait LOL
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooo Pittwitch I loved this! I loved the first one but this was a great sort of sequel, I'd love to see more if you are thinking about continuing!
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Vicious plot bunny attack? LOL!!!
Why do I keep thinking of that demented bunny from Monty Python and the Holy Grail. Here is innocent Pitt, sitting by her computer, when all of a sudden WHAM! LOL

Anyway, I always loved this one-shot of yours so I am glad you added another chapter!

Of course, this was so hot and depraved. I loved it! I was even a little stunned at first. LOL

Then you put in that hilarious twist at the end. It was so much fun! You must write part 3! My two favorite Malfoys!

Excellent job Pitt!



person Jaime
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! That was fantastic!! I loved the twist at the end. You must write the threesome. I beg of you!!
person kazfeist
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. They certainly played Lucius, didn't they? You do need a third chapter to round it out, though. :D
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lol, Pitt, that was sooo sizzling hot, and FUNNY. I can't believe I've never read a Lucius-as-stripper/gigolo story before. I have been missing out, clearly. Excellent.
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, and chapter two is even more blistering. You *are* going to write that threesome, aren't you?