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Chatty: I loved this chapter. I was cracking up. It was rather sexy as well . . . not Ron and Draco :::shudders::: but the reactions Hermione was getting from the wizards. Her attitude about blowjobs was funny, and Snape's reaction even funnier.

"Ew indeed. I'll show her Eww."

lololol. Thank you so much for this addition to the story. :))) Very nice.

Ah Chatty posted her chapter before I did. /emo emo emo

XD *scraps story idea*

I suppose this means I'll have to do the update I've been avoiding, and hope to death that other people find it funny XD

I have truly enjoyed the first ten chapters. I especially like how one author wants to take the story one way and then she is thwarted by the next author who didn't like the direction they took. Keep it up ladies.

gennastar: That really is a hoot, isn't it? I love it. lol.

Thanks for a great chapter...Ms. Figgs! And also thanks for reformating mine. Can't wait to see what happens when they see Ron and Draco!
Just to let you all know...I put the lemon in because I thought it might be interesting to have it come out that she was still under a spell from the male Veelas to be randy around a fertile male when she was ovalating. They thought that they'd have access to her while she was staying with them for the nine months. Once Snape realizes what's going on he has to put a stop to it, though it's really in his nature to want to keep sampling the benefits of her state. Problem is, she's open to ALL males. Hey, I'm new at this! lol.

“We were going to do it. But it turned out Ron’s gay.” Hermione said sadly

was in another chappie so Hermione should already know of it

but ms figg cheapter was great ^^

Thanks hmmm. I couldn't find it, although someone told me that was the case. I've adapted chapter 15 to reflect she does know Ron's gay, but of course, that doesn't stop her from wanting to go to Malfoy Manor, afraid Ron is chained in a dungeon or something. lol. Where there's a will there's a way. :))

It was good for a first attempt, but you really should get a beta reader to correct your mistakes in the future. They were few and easily over looked for the most part (spelling and wording sellections), but I don't know of any writter that doesn't need help in these areas. Good work and I hope to read more of your writing in the future.

I feel like it would be a lemon too soon, due to the characters not being emotionally ready yet. >>;