rate_review Reviews

Great Teacher: Thank you so much for two enjoyable and cohesive chapters. And ESPECIALLY for the Venus FlyTrap. I read Hermione touching it and said to myself, oh no. lolol. Good work with clarification of how the Blood Bond works. I think you've given enough background and interest for more authors to pick up. If they don't, you are welcome to keep going. I'm really enjoying the story. Come on yall. :))

I'm glad to have helped ^_^
I think the plot is really interesting and everyone putting their heads together to come up with something fantastic is intriguing.
I'll try to see if I can add more to it, I would really like to. And the formatting as well as the placement of the dialogue is great.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Ah, jeez. messed up on the html part. sorry 'bout that.

Great Teacher: You did a WONDERFUL job getting this story back on track. I did my best to fix the formatting, hope you didn't mind my separating the dialogue a bit for easier reading. I couldn't tell what part you wanted italicized though. The banter between them was enjoyable. Snape rubbed her nose in it, didn't he?

"Why do I always end up naked in front of you?"

That line cracked me up. I also liked that you clearly put Hermione's pursuit by Snape into play. Thank you so much for your addition. You are welcome to keep going if you have any more ideas. There's no limit of how many chapters you can add. A few in succession wouldn't hurt at all. ;) ***

A LITTLE PLOT NIFFLER:

Okay, this is something I would love to see happen. I hope someone picks it up.

Veelas are supposed to have plant growing properties. I would love to see Hermione helplessly affecting plants, making them grow into huge ones every time she is around them for a period of time. Not immediately, maybe overnight or something. lol. Or withered plants can become healthy, or dangerous plants even more dangerous because of their size. I just think it would be funny. Thanks

I thought the "afro" hex to be quite unnecessary as well as a bit offensive.

Afro hex: As someone who finds stereotypes funny, as well as someone who has worn afros and seen others of all races wearing them, I wasn't the least bit offended, but tickled. But then again, I love stuff that isn't politically correct. Afros really don't look good on everyone, no matter what they think and not everyone finds them appealing. Obviously Hermione doesn't. And to be honest, that's her right. Just my opinion though. :) Ir doesn't make your reservations any less valid. Thanks for your comments.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

DarkOneSS: I'm so sorry hon, but that's just too short to be considered a true chapter, so I am going to have to take it down. This is the first time I'm doing something like this, but there has to be a bit more interaction. At least a few hundred words. Again, my apologies. Perhaps you could lengthen it? Thanks.