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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter :D
I was thinking about adding something, but I wasn't sure how to go about it. :x
This chap puts them on an even playing field I think, which makes it easier and bit more fun to play with for the next upcoming author.
I was thinking about adding something, but I wasn't sure how to go about it. :x
This chap puts them on an even playing field I think, which makes it easier and bit more fun to play with for the next upcoming author.
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February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story was good up to the last chapter. Not that it is badly written, but it turned Severus completely OOC from the way he was in the first few chapters. Usually there is some indication of his bastard nature, and it was clear to see he wasn't trying to get at Hermione but resist her. Now he is plotting to break her heart? It doesn't make sense and is a development that is going to be hard to fix. I preferred the story as it was. It wasn't necessary to add this twist. I doubt anyone tries to fix this one. A shame. It was going pretty good for a collaborative story.
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
too many cooks spoil the broth... and this story proves soo true. specially Q_C trying to get her raped by canteurs and lucius. sheesh. :( someone please get severus and hermione together for god's sake!
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@21 awesome chapter!!
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm very interested to see where this goes. Great work everyone, keep it up.
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February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol Queen, putting stuff in the game. Not cold-hearted, woman-ruining Severus! :::shakes head::: Well, let's see what happens now, especially with Lucius hip to the game. :)
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February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am back! I took a haitus from writing my story, for something more interesting. >w> ACTUALLY I just decided to play Devils Advocate and throw in something twisted and snarly for the other authors to get their paws into. I hope no one kills me in my sleep!! ;-;
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February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this chapter Queen! I love a nasty Snape, the harder he is, the harder he falls...he he.Also love that Lucius is in it, makes a nice subplot. This could turn out to be a book, yeah!
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February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I actually am quite interested to see how the next author will handle this new situation >:D
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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@20 wow i love this story. at first when i read that other authors could add chapters i thought the story wouldn't flow and would be all jumpy but its not, you can hardley tell its written by different people. its very good, and i cant wait to read more!!
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