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for Very Nearly Veela

by Ms_Figg

person Ms_Figg
schedule September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amirah: There is no set order or list of authors. Anyone is welcome to add a chapter or a few chapters at any time. Or even finish the piece if no one else contributes. So, why don't you add something?
person Anon
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Lils
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, blood bonded....that was an awesome add-in!!! I hope Sev can save Hermione!!!!
person amsev
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, ladies (and gentlemen?) you are doing such a great job on this story -- I started reading it this morning and was looking forward to coming home tonight to finish reading it thus far. Very nicely done! Heh, looks like the doo is going to hit the fan with this last chapter and Severus viewing Hermione's memories...
schedule June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOU... thank you so much for all the correcting all of my mistakes and making it readable I feel so honored right now to have been able to write something that went into a fanfic of your creation *sniffles*
person Expected Aberrance
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I realize this is an open format, community-based post, but the least a contributer could do is run a spelling/grammar check if one was to go through the trouble of posting. It would take seconds, at most.
person mlui
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 25 - A very nice chapter. There were a few spelling/grammatical errors, but you warned me beforehand, so it was all good. I hope someone'll update again soon! =)
person Ms_Figg
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
kitsunekilala: Your spelling and puncuation were atrocius! BUT, you certainly can tell a story. :)) I cleaned it up for you, but if you focused more on your grammar and spelling, I am certain you would write some very interesting and compelling stories on your own. Think about it, but this was a wonderful chapter. You're a natural storyteller. Brava!
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok umm yeah i suck and stuff and punctiuation soooo XP sorry i hope though it ok its my first time doing somthing like this and uum yeah i thought it was going to be sent to you first for.. it to be ok'd and fixed up...>.> sorry >.<
person Hermione_shag69
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow I like it
is she going to be a virgen just forever
i want to see more accion truly its getting kite borring!
update soon