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Calamine Horn: Well, I thought your writing excellent. Readers know what they like and that can make good fodder for writing your own stuff. That's how I started out . . . wanting more then having to come up with my own stories to entertain me. lol at your "selfish reasons" for posting that chapter. I can understand it. When I write, I suspend my personal feelings. I often write things completely unacceptable to who I am as a person, but with the thought in mind that even though I might not like it, these things can happen and do. So I do my best to let the story ride without anything personal shining through. Some might construe I think such things as rape and non-consenual sex are okay. In the real world, no. But in a story it can happen. There has to be some conflict, some things that make us uncomfortable, because let's face it, that's how the real world works. If it had been me alone, I would have kept what the Veela are doing impersonal and cold, focused and purposeful. There would have been no remorse because what is one human compared to the continuance of a race? It's desperation. Desperate individuals think only of their needs. But on the other hand, I knew immediately what you were doing and why, and it is fine with me and does add something to the story at least on the part of one Veela. Like I said, it shows they aren't all monsters. Again, I say thanks for contributing. I'm also flattered that you made an account just to contribute. I really think you should start writing your own stories. You have a certain storytelling ability that I really like. Maybe we'll see something from you in the future. **** I don't think it will be smut though. lololol.

Ms-Figg, take over the story dammit! or you write a seperate version of it. im not into this veela thing so that was pretty bearable for me. but dont you EVER do this to your other PWPs. ^_^ let them be one shots or YOU continue them. but its nice you are letting other authors continue - but woman! you've spoilt us for any other authors ok, see! im throwing a temper tantrum here.

Haha those two chapter updates were great, I got a few chuckles out of them as well, except I dont know what to put up next. xD;; Oh well good thing I'm not the only one contributing! :)

This story is doing good so far... I am not ready to add a Story yet or a chapter to this story... I feel I would muck it up and I do not want to do that lol But real good so far

Somebody please give me more Please compleete this Somebody Please Please Please finish this story please email me when you do Thank you

There you are!

I was wondering where you went for a while. It was all so terribly fluffy and rather too happy for it to be your style. Then you unveil this chapter and it rocks my world with the twists! It's so you. I love it!

I can't wait until the next installment. I'll be checking back frequently.

Ev: This story is being added to by other writers so there will be differing styles, voices, plot twists etc. I may add a chapter here or there but I'm hoping that others will continue to contribute to it, using what's gone before.

Nice save.

the sex scene was terrible.

It sounds like the beginning of an awesome story. Keep writing! :)