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NOTE: I edited my chapter "Behind the Veil" for the sake of continuity. So, instead of Hermione being "Veeled in every orifice" now she's been "prepared." That way her continued virgin status makes sense.

Hahahahahahhaa love how this is coming along!

lol Ms_Figg. I just wanted to save hermione from those veelas and this is what happened. *sigh* and Draco is blood bonded with Ron right... so i thought it would be easier to take him out of the equation by making him gay or something. lol. But Hermione being a virgin is never bad... esp if she's going to do it with snape. *grin* hope u liked it. and before this i thought i would never write anything in my life...

Great new chapter. The chapter so awesome that it was posted twice! LOL! Just thought to let you know. Keep up the good work everyone.

the last chapter was not pasted properly and was incomplete so i posted it again. sorry about that. :( i hope Ms_Figg deletes that.

Ooh. Turning on a bit of the heat there, Chatty. "...don

Ms_Figg, you deleted the wrong chapter. lol. ok will post that again.

Well...it started good even if I don't like Veela storys that much...but this fic is not really my liking. That is because I don't like it when somebody is being raped. Constantly and I prefer just SS/HG storys. I hope that Ms_Figg will continue soon with her own fanfics.But nevertheless it is wonderful how you're working together. Every author earns a praise.

Ah, a touch of humanity, remorse and guilt on the part of at least one Veela. It was disturbing, but compelling and made Morthan seem less of a monster in one aspect, but still made what they were doing as a whole seem more so, even if it is for the survival of the species. A nice touch to make Hermione aware that her sense of touch was off, and that the elixir helped to make her more fertile. Also that she was beginning to see through the illusion. Thanks for the chapter, Calamine Horn. *** And the saga continues.

I won't pretend I'm a good writer, but as a reader, I didn't want Hermione to be so ruthlessly taken advantage of. I had selfish reasons for posting, I wanted the Veela's to feel for her, and I wanted her to start figuring it out. I pretty much just threw in opportunities for fluffiness. ^^ Though I'm very happy with Miss Figg making the situation so much more realistic and deep. I actually started writing a review when I thought "Hey wait a minute... anyone can post right?" So I up and made an account and voila.

Anyway, I apologize for all the errors and overall crappiness, I turned it out quickly. At least it's short! ^^