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January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please These taeaser's are starting to get to me I like it so far but i dont like to be teased lol but I guess I will have to deal with being teased hehehehe
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January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL that chapter was fab especially manipulative Snape at his best making Hermione wonder about Ron...........
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol. Well, you certainly got Ron out of the way, didn't you? I'm sure the "warring lovers" plot device existed long before "Love Can Be a Battle or a War" girl. lololol But fighting lovers can be fun. :)
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
update again soon!
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ehhhh. Its alright.
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No offense but I though this was an o.k. story up until chapter 8. From there on out it made absolutely no sense, and it reads as if a 12 year old wrote it. Sorry but I can no longer support.
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A stronger warning is needed. Sorry, but I didn't wait for an update for an SS/HG story to read an entire chapter of Ron & Draco that has nothing to do with the main plot.
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi Lisa_Jean. I am adapting the warnings as the story comes along since it is a collaborative effort. Now, as far as I know there is a possibility that Draco and Ron's Blood Bond might actually have a connection with the main plot since Snape is trying to find out how to dissolve that bond because of a request by Narcissa Malfoy. I'm just taking a stab that is, or will be the case. Sorry you were disappointed, but when you have different authors, then . . . well anything can (and might) happen in a story.
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January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chatty, the rest of the chapter was great! I love the fact that you are trying to establish the idea that what Snape is feel has nothing to do with the veela effect! Great work.
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January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great job on the story. Only one correction. In Chapter 4 (Veelria), someone has Hermione having sex in the bath with the Veelas, but in chapter 11, we have her as a virgin???