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November 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like your twist with Harry as the part veela. Everyone seems more or less in character and I'm glad Harry got a happy ending here. Great story.
I literally laughed out loud at: "Harry began to understand why Snape had not hesitated on the Tower" and this one "It was absurdly comforting to know that even in his dreams Malfoy was an ass-hat."
I literally laughed out loud at: "Harry began to understand why Snape had not hesitated on the Tower" and this one "It was absurdly comforting to know that even in his dreams Malfoy was an ass-hat."
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March 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nice twIst with the price thing. Very Malfoy-ish.
The characters are great and the whole thing is really well-written.
Really great story :D
The characters are great and the whole thing is really well-written.
Really great story :D
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October 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
thanks for this nice fic
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September 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was so amazing! I have so many butterflies in my stomach right now.
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August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this, it isn't the normal veela extreme-domination non-con extravaganza that I'm used to reading. I love how I could still recognize the characters even through bizarre circumstances.
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October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful job. I was a bit worried about this story with your summary making fun of other Veela stories, rather than just calling it different/original, but this was welldone.
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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have read almost all of your oneshots, and I have to say this one is by far my favorite. Harry's utter lack of control and disgust at his Veela tendencies made me laugh. And it was nice to see Malfoy slowly beginning to care about Harry, even if he tried to hide it. I look forward to reading the rest of your stories!
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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi.
This was a very interesting idea for a fic and works well until the end in my opinion. I get both Harry's and Draco's reaction but there appears to be no reason for why Draco acts the way he does at the end, why he allows and more to the point wants their bonding to be completed. It is a brilliant one-shot and a original idea for the relationship of the two mates.
This was a very interesting idea for a fic and works well until the end in my opinion. I get both Harry's and Draco's reaction but there appears to be no reason for why Draco acts the way he does at the end, why he allows and more to the point wants their bonding to be completed. It is a brilliant one-shot and a original idea for the relationship of the two mates.
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March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it! its perfect!
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January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. Absolutely wonderful. From start to finish, I was completely captivated. Words fall short. All I can say is that I hope to read more stories from you. If your one-shots are this good, I can't image how amazing a multy-chapter fic would be like.