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See, this is why I'm a reader of archives and pretend not to read WIPs... I suck at the patience game when the story is this interesting. (And I love Lucius and cannot help myself. He's far too lovely for his own good. And such a braggart of a father!) Anyway. I'm just going to go do some other stuff and then when Tuesday comes around I'm going to read the next chapter. And pretend to be patient.

Okay, I admit it, I'm hooked. I want to know what that worm thingy was in the pit, what's in the phial, where Hermione is going to spend the night, how she ended going back in time, what Snape was doing at the mouth of the pit, and all kinds of other things too. Please hurry up Tuesday, I hate waiting, especially when I really NEED to know what's gonna happen next. And what about Ron, he must be going frantic back in normal time.
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Hi RhiannonoftheMoon,
Woaw the begiining of your story is very interesting.I love the idea that it takes place in the past,but not at the timeperiod of the marauders.I just love timeturner stories but this one seems different as Hermione and Severus must be nearly the same age.I do not know if this story is going to include a longer periode of time,but I wonder what would happen if the future Hermione would meet the one that is stuck into the past and cannot go home.That would be quite interesting.I must congratulate you to your very elaborated style of writing. As I'm not english speaking,I had to refer abnormally often to the translator.(But I love learning knew expreassions.)(((H)))Sureves Epans

A very interesting first chapter! I liked that you chosed not to take her back to the Marauder-time when Severus was still a student, most fic taking her back in time uses that timeframe. I look forward to read more of this story, a story where they both are adult and where some things have already happened, others migth be prevented can be nothing less than interesting. Adding that it is very well written I look forward to spend some time in your company so update again soon!!!

I enjoyed your Inuyasha stories, so I'm sure I will enjoy this one.

The beginning is great. I can't wait to read more!

I like it. Please update soon.

oh goodie :D

i love the mistery this story has n cant wait to read next :)