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I like this so far. You're a very good writer and give good descriptions. I'm excited to see what happens :D

"This one goes to 11!"

You know, I really value my anonymity. I've avoided logging in for as long as possible; having not grown up in the Internet Age (it commenced after I'd finished college), I have no need to have my details plastered all over Facebook or MySpace or whathaveyou. But after I read the bit about "...subwoofer turned up to 11..." I found that there was no way, no way at all, that I'd be able to refrain from singing out in the review section.

Great story. Can't wait to see where it goes (I've only finished the second chapter so far).

Cheers

CB

Which twenty years do you mean? Severus is surely only barely into his twenties at this point, and he didn't meet Lily until he was nine, so I assume you mean the Severus of Hermione's own timeline. But that's one of those things that Time Turner-type fics usually deal with as a paradox (altering the events of the past alters the future, thus maintaining consistency and creating a bit of a loop) so future-Severus would remember Hermione... I recognize that there's no guarantee that Severus falls in love with Hermione and only PRETENDS to pine for Lily for the entirety of his servitude to Dumbledore, but I confess I am curious to see how this one works out. Especially if Severus is dead in Hermione's timeline.

Really loving this story!
One question: Didn't Harry say that Snape loved his mother during his final fight with Voldemort? Hermione would have heard it then. I suppose she might not have known for how long he loved her, but the story might need a bit of a tweak. Just checking! (I am willing to suspend my disbelief, don't worry. :))

Chapter two was great.. now chapter three! ^_^

Excuuuse me? Where's the next chapter! This is the best way to ignore my own story, by reading yours! XD I MEAN you're story is obviously inspiration [ to slack and just read] erm cross the bracketed bit out. >>;

I LOVE the story so far! It's great how you had her go back in time to after being in school; though I do like those ones too, but this is a great change of pace. Loved it and anxiously awaiting more!

Very interesting beginning... looking forward to how hermione will solve her problem of having nowhere to call home in the near future out. But very promising and I like your style of writing, plus the realism that you create in your writing. Most promising, indeed. As a certain professor would most definitely say.

I like it. Please update soon.

Marvelous! I'm a fan of your Inuyasha stories as well - so glad to see you're writing S/H - especially tackling it post-DH! Young Sev and Lucius are great - I'm already in love with both. :)