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for Corset Laces.

by Utopia

schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lol I was just taking a glance through your other stories since your current work has caught my attention, when I noticed this little piece. I found it highly entertaining to read, and what's more, it's a normal family life, especially for the Malfoy's. You don't see a lot of that when you're an avid slash reader. I barely ever see Lucius as someone who loves his wife, more as a Dominant style gay man who likes to prey on little boys such as Harry ... OK thoughts out of the gutter!!!!

But in all seriousness, it was nice and refreshing to read a 'normal' family through reading this. Like I said, it's something I rarely see in the style of fics I usually frequent.

And with that I think I need to go work on an assignment that is becoming rather pressing.

~gorgeousbowneyes
schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey Doll! SG recommended this to me and I'm glad she did! It was fab!
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Such a sweet story.
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I must say that this was a refreshing story. I do love a good Narcissa/Lucius romance every so often. I think there is something to be said about their relationship. Jo never said anything specific in the book, so it has always been a mystery, but I think that you have captured the spirit of their marriage beautifully. I hope to see more on your other story; "A Thief to Catch a Thief, a Death Eater to Catch A" it has wonderful potential.

Write lots more!
person amy skydancer
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully done, as always! Lovely little one-shot. I won't plead for a second (or third or fourth..) chapter. Honest..I won't beg, or grovel, or offer chocolate, or, sculpt a chocolate version of Malfoy just for you...nope I won't. 'cause this was a *sigh* lovely little one shot!

sky

(... decides to go buy 12 pounds of white chocolate anyway.....)

schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HEHE! I love it....and I am always willing to take the blame when it comes to something sweet and funny! Though the corset idea was yours to begin with......alright, I need to get back to reading It takes a thief! Have a fantastic day!