rate_review Reviews

I enjoyed this story a lot. Good job.

Oh my god, you responded! Yay!

*Palm, head* Of course, it was Nott! Jeez, you gave enough indication at the beginning. I should've gotten it, but I thought that was just a spot of fun. I am kinda glad to hear it was more, I like Theo and Draco a loooot, which I was not a huge supporter of until you and your wonderful stories. Well, thanks for that and for letting me know. You rock!

This story was amazing! A sequel would be appreciated, but its wonderful as a oneshot. I like the happy ending especialy, it wasn't looking too happy at the start, but you pulled it off.
I wish I could write like you!
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Draco was in love with Theodore Nott, but Theodore was not interested in him that way. He was just in it for the sex. I'm sure Draco had a very soft spot for Snape, though. How could he not?

*Hops up and down like a hyperactive wild child* Who was Draco in love with? Who, who, who? I kinda hope it's not Harry, mostly because I don't like when Draco pines for Harry... It seems like that was kind of what you were shooting for, but I'm going to pretend like it was Snape. Haha. Anyhoo, since it was vice versa, my mouth was watering. You are so brilliant, you contained an entire life in just a few pages. The general decline of Harry and Ginny's relationship was elegantly done, "She knew all of his stories and he all of hers." There was nothing that was overtly mean or unpleasant just simply... drifting apart. Wonderful. The cultivation of Harry and Draco's relationship was also extremely well done, as always. You're a genius. Harry's realization of being gay and interested in Malfoy was perfect... It was slow, yet, quick... I'm not making any sense. There wasn't an elaborate explanation and yet what was said moved the story along adeptly and didn't drown out the stomach-fluttering with unnecessary blithering. I'm still not making sense, I know, but I adore you and what I'm saying, or not saying, is all good things, I swear!

Your adoring fan, Maddie!

I thought this moved along a bit fast, but I really liked it! It had some bitterweet elements to it, Draco's crying, his terse confession at having been in love once (with Harry?), and his obvious need for love and affection at war with his "Malfoy-ness."

I thought you had some pieces of real brilliance here describing the state of Harry and Ginny's marriage, how they'd settled into merely co-existing without the bond of their children making them really live. That, and how Harry seemed to truly realise this only after having Draco point the situation out to him when speaking of his own reasons for marrying. That bit was indescribably sad, Draco having been in love unrequietedly, and Harry having never been in love at all. I liked it that you portrayed all this without the usual Ginnybashing.


As with several other of your reviewers, I think this could be a brilliant start to a longer, chaptered fic, and wish you would consider it. There's so much potential here for going further. Please do consider it, and if you ever do decide to continue, please notify me at jillianetpr@yahoo.com

Thanks for another great read.

Oh wow, very orignal idea!
Extremely Hot scenes!

I love it. Sweet, sad, believable, touching and smutty goodness a good combination indeed :D

ANOTHER smashing fic!!!!

*mushy sigh*

Love it...

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I sooo love that!!!