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May 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well I like it and I hope to see more when you can please do not give up in this story it is really interesting so farvand I would love to see where you take it. Let me know please .....
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July 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
keep going the story was just getting good
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April 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please, update soon!
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December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
update your stories please, it really sucks that there isn't any more than 4 chapters a story.
well writeen want to read more. update.
well writeen want to read more. update.
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November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it's a lovely story
my favorite things in a story are:
-evil dumeldore
-slash
-mpreg (tho i dont think it would fit in this one)
-harry/voldemorot
so that makes this one of my favoties
continiu plz *puppydog eyes*
my favorite things in a story are:
-evil dumeldore
-slash
-mpreg (tho i dont think it would fit in this one)
-harry/voldemorot
so that makes this one of my favoties
continiu plz *puppydog eyes*
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February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good start, you need a beta, a little more detail wouldn't be amiss either. Try to avoid putting comments in the middle of the story, it sort of ruins the mood you've set and readers lose their 'concentration' of the story... Harry sure got over his suicidal thoughts fast... one min he was all for killing himself, the next he's alright and accepting Severus as his father... a little fast, but your choice i guess, you're the author after all...
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it !!!! Harry/ tom is sooo hot!!! more please
Kisses
Ladyroo
Kisses
Ladyroo
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I really like the concept of this story. I can't wait for chapter 4 to be updated. ^_~
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahahaha! I love Tom! He is adorable! And Harry is...well Harry! :) Snape is such a tragic character as usual! I want more update soon!
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really funny. This is really good so far. Update soon. Wow...Tom blushing...there's something you don't see everyday.