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for Hymn to Color

by Lomonaaeren

person SoftObsidian74
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You write sensory deprivation so well, whether it's voicelessness or blindness, it feels real. I really like this one.
person evalhanne
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's interesting how Harry assigns the colors. Draco's opening up and showing that all he wanted was to continue to be in Harry's life one way or another was pretty sweet.
person Dezra
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a very sweet story. I love how Draco had to argue with himself to realize what exactly what he wanted. Anoter great story. Well done.
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I only have one thing to say.

Will there be a sequel?

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person NightLo
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This really is bittersweet! Really, there is no easy way for the two to reach each other, when one is rottenly spoiled while the other lacks chances to learn/experience...

I especially like the description of colors, the feeling and emotion is just too real!!! Either for the desparation and emptiness in Harry's voice, or the frustration and lost feelings of Draco...

No matter what awaits for them, just wish they will be there for each other!
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg i love it and just oh my god!
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent start. I can't wait to read more.