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for Hermione’s Revenge, Lucius’s Peace

by Utopia

person amy skydancer
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Utopia....I wanted to review your pre-amble even before I read the story!!!!!!!!! * Whistles for an owl to deliver a bag of P.B.U.N.S. ( Plot Bunny Ultra Nutritious Snacks(silent "P")) to Utopia's Desk

The story was a HOOT!!!! ( please give Hermione a chance to come up with a "cause" with H.O.O.T. As its acronym! lol...


Mussing up Malfoys hair was "the" perfect revenge for Hermione. I must cast my vote ( and if I can ballot-stuff more in I will * Slytherin tactics!) for MORE MORE MORE!!!!!


Sky
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved your story!!!!
person Hope
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a really sweet story. I wish it wasn't a one shot.
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It appears I will never get back to Lucius in grey leather at this rate as I just discovered yet another sweet little ficlet on my way back **sigh** what torture at 8:20am to be sitting with my laptop reading delightful tales, however will I get through the day LOL


Alright, Im really getting back to the story now........unless I get sidetracked again when I get to your panel........
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay I know that this was a oneshot but I really really liked it and it would be cool if you did maybe another couple of chapters to end it or something....not that I'm fishing for more story or anything....okay maybe I am. Great story!
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was an excellent one shot. I hope that sometime you can try and write another story to go along with this. I for one would read it. I absolutely love Lucius/Hermione pairings. It would be great to see where you could take this story.
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome Story. Great job.
person jaimelee
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Great work. Can you please write more to this? This is an amazing idea and I think it has great potential to expand into a fantastic multi-chapter story about how Lucius overcomes his grief, and how Hermione will accept him. Please write more!
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmmmm... i rather like how this began. it would be a shame to let such a wonderful premise slip away as only a oneshot/plot bunny!
person pam
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story, please give us a sequel!!!