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for The End of Pretence

by altoforensics

schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, I can't wait to find out the the "Sect" is and who the watcher is. Keep up the good work. ^_^
person KageMori
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
whoo-hoo! i love this story! its so good! i cant wait untill you have the next chapter up!!
person Nonny
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like
update soon
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I can't wait to find out what happens now that Harry is no longer "hiding". ^_^ Keep up the good work and I hope you update again soon.
person sanda
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This by far is the best chapter i really love this story please up date soon
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice twist! Petunia being his real Mum and Dubles being stupid enough to out his realtive in the house. I hate Dumbles.
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i liove it i like what your doing and yeah you could fastforward to hi sixth year update soon please
person sanda
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. I like stories where Hermione is kept on. Ron is just a git.