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for The End of Pretence

by altoforensics

person Tiffany (Melina)
schedule August 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG This is I think officially my favorite story on this site! And I have read at least a Quarter of the Harry Potter fanfics on this site!
I love how you pretty much skipped school I thought that was actually pretty brilliant. Also loved how you gave harry the cannon story through school though you tweaked the beginning and end of the cannon I think that was brilliant.
I wish you would finish the story though if it is even half as good at the beginning then we are in good hands. Pretty please?
schedule July 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
My main question why did you stop writing this. Its good
schedule February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful story.
Would love it if you were to continue writing this story.
Please update soon.

SM
schedule January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Fascinating. Must have more! Update list? Cvmail11@yahoo.com, please?
schedule January 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am hoping upon hoping that you will update even though it has been a year. This was one of my favorite stories. Can't wait if you do in fact update.
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and I am sorry to see that it seem to be abandoned. I would have loved to read the rest of this story. If you ever decide to get back to it I would be happy to read it.
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
will you be doing more with this story..and btw, OMG that drawing of
snape in your profile "Melts my butter" *swoons* damn.

Ok..I am loving this story. I hope you pick it back up soon..PLEASE!?!?!?!?
person K505
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Alto

This is wicked! I hope you can update soon, but no pressure. I understanding screaming: update,update, update is rather annoying and sometimes detrimental towards the writer, never the less looking forward to more. Please e-mail me when you've updated.

Your adoring fan,
Night Fury
person RRW
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now this was a great chapter...can't wait to see what you do with the Weasleys.
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I NEED more. This story is amazing and I'm completely hooked. Hoping for another update soon. Until then! :)