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for Out of Control

by xXDrivenWildXx

person kylanSB
schedule February 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this really is one of my favorite, hope you can continue this :(
schedule January 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I have really been enjoying your story, the sex scenes are steamy and each one brings something a little different and you've left a lot of room for other avenues in sex to be explored still. I will admit to also being very curious who the wizard was who 'infected' Hermione with the this growing lust. It seems that with each act, her sexual hunger keeps increasing making it hard for her to focus on finding a way to stop and with how everyone seems to respond so quickly to her desires, including a professor, it makes me wonder if her condition at least temporarily affects the others around her, or if those she comes in contact with will affect them more long term and if there is a point where the lust will level off, not go away but even out. I keep looking forward to future chapters, more interactions with Snape, Malfoy and even Harry as well as new encounters and and situations and sexual adventures. I also wonder if the loss of sexual self control will have any ultimate negative effects on Hermione with her work or if it's just to be a fun sexual adventure. Either way I keep looking forward to more. Please keep on writing.
schedule December 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! How did I miss this one! I love it. I hope you have more chapters to come and soon! I can't wait to read more!
person JK
schedule September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this story even if it is just one long sex filled romp. Oddly, I am interested in who the mystery wizard who put the spell on her. I'm assuming it's someone we haven't seen yet. Charlie Weasley is scorching, so I'm looking forward to his chapter. Another reviewer mentioned beastality. Will that be in Charlie's chapter? For such a sex-filled story, there isn't a lot of kink in there. The Seamus chapter was awesome because the lad never gets any love and the sex was really unique and different. And hot!!!!! It would be nice to see Hermione go after someone who isn't as horny as she is. Everyone is gagging for it, so I have to agree with whoever commented it would be nice to see her go after a younger girl who has to be seduced or tricked into it. Or will the spell be reveresed and Hermione not be into as before, but others go after her? Update soon!!!!!!
person Georgia
schedule September 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much! It makes me hot, and makes me come all the time when I masturbate to it.
Hopefully a chapter with some Charlie/Hermione soon! ;)
update soon, please!
schedule September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing nd I can't wait for more!!!!
person DD
schedule August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG this story is so hot! I swear it always works me up into a frenzy :-)
person tracie
schedule August 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, I like how you made Hermione into a little slut puppy and not the virginal bookworm that we read so often. I need more, please update soon.
person amanda
schedule August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So, uh. I REALLY love it. It seems pretty realistic in the sense that the characters are in character. However, Snape calling Hermione a mudblood seems unlike him seeing as his relationship with Lily was ruined because of that word. Anyways. PLEASE update. I eagerly await the next chapter. More snape :)
person Ravenclaw Jedi
schedule August 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Read this is one go. The Draco/Hermione parts were hot! My favorite chapter was Seamus because it was orignial and you never see him! I was looking forward to the femmeslash, but was surprised that all three girls were into it so quickly. Any chance for some more f/f with Hermione seducing an innocent younger girl or a naive Hufflepuff? Pretty please? Can't wait for Charlie!