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by dweek

schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Draco is such a rat! lol. You write his sneaky, devious, manipulating side very well. I'm enjoying this story a lot. Well done! Hope you update again soon.
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter. I feel a bit sorry for poor Pansy at the moment though, & I'm actually laughing in advance to Luna's reaction of Draco's little present for her. He is such a sneaky git in this fic! I think this is one of my fave stories & I hope you update again soon!
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this story. You don't see a lot of Draco/Luna pairings and that's so funny because if you visually picture them, they seem perfect for each other. I like how he's portrayed in this, it's not over the top, but maintains his basic characteristics, and you've fleshed out Luna well. Very sexy story...
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like this story, and I also like the idea of a Luna/Draco ship..your fic is reasonably well-written and it is an intriguing pairing. What Goyle did was funny. Luna is totally in character, which really helps make the story. Onto the next chapter...
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ha ha he was hiding outside the shower stalls...that was funny and so felt like Draco to hide when she was done...he is really just a curious, silly boy! And all those voyeuristic glimpses.
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay wow. So Draco treats Pansy almost the same as he does Luna when he's taking her...Like in calling Pansy "pet" as well. Hmmm, surprising...I suggest, though you probably already have this in mind...I suggest having Pansy find out what Draco is up to with Luna! That would really shock her.
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you've updated so soon & hope you will again as soon as you can. I'm enjoying this story a lot due to the actual plot behind it. I like the way you characterize Draco & stick to his arrogance etc. This story is moving along nicely, & not speeding into any sex scenes which is a good thing. Keep up the good work!
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story so far. I love how well you've capture Draco's attitude. These are my fave couple and you don't see too many fics about them, so I was thrilled when I spotted this one. Hope you update soon.
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another good story, I'm really looking forward to what's coming!

Oh look, a badly made pun!