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May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm interesting story. But maybe go into different aspects. Like you said he got her better robes. Now are they like normal robes or supper tight cleavage robes? Like is he making her look like a classey lady or a slut?
How is the rest of the school seeing her, besides that she dress's better. Is she more obedient to everyone?
It's obvious Draco has her under his thumb now, why doesn't he progress?
How is the rest of the school seeing her, besides that she dress's better. Is she more obedient to everyone?
It's obvious Draco has her under his thumb now, why doesn't he progress?
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April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
is Anthony an original character? I didn't think there were that many Jews in the wizarding world
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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would love it if Pansy ended up losing Draco to Luna in the end, how she can lose something she never had I'm not sure, but I guess you know what I mean lol. Goyle's reasoning had me laughing, poking someone in the eye over a cupcake lol, although I do have the feeling it was more down to Draco and his jealousy than anything else lol. This story is coming along nicely! Keep up the good work!
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March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have the feeling that Draco was rather jealous that Luna was asked out because he really wants her for himself lol, hope so it would serve his right! lol. I really love how this story is coming along. Hope you update this one again soon!
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March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I sense that Draco was a little jealous about Anthony asking her out...or at least I hope so. Can't wait for the next update.
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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This fic still is interesting to me...I'm still with you. I wonder what he's planning and how Pansy will actually treat her. I'm glad to see that other boys are interested in her and I hope that Draco eventually treats her better or at least starts to care for her...although I can't deny what he's doing with her is damn sexy.
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have the feeling she is probably dreaming about Draco, although that could just be wishful thinking on my part as I love the pairing! lol. I'm glad your continuing with this story. Update again soon!
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great so far: smooth transitioning, Draco is a devious bastard, Pansy worships his cock, and Luna has that charming innocence to her
keep up the good work
keep up the good work
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February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's very odd how whenever I check back to this site you've updated my fave story lol. Another good chapter, love it as always.
I'm just a teeny bit confused at this chapter though. My understanding was that Draco was telling Luna that he was helping her to get Ron when really it was all for him, that he in fact wants her for himself & has no intention of her ever being with Ron. Is that right?
Hope you update this one again soon!
I'm just a teeny bit confused at this chapter though. My understanding was that Draco was telling Luna that he was helping her to get Ron when really it was all for him, that he in fact wants her for himself & has no intention of her ever being with Ron. Is that right?
Hope you update this one again soon!
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good fic there ^_^
I am getting to like the pairing. This one works well, the dominant Draco and the slightly naive learning Luna. Looking forward to reading more from you!
I am getting to like the pairing. This one works well, the dominant Draco and the slightly naive learning Luna. Looking forward to reading more from you!