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I'm glad to see you've resumed this one. I enjoy stories like this, but they're so hard to find. Personally, i'm looking forward to Luna's next leash caused dream. It should Definately be interesting. I'll be looking forward to your next update.

Update please :)

I love the couple, and really like the concept. I haven't finished the story yet, so I can't say what I think of that right now.

I adore this story! I like how you use Draco's bullying tendancy to gain control over Luna & I really like how you portray his manipulating side. Great chapter! Looking forward to more!!

Sorry, I just thought I'd point out that it's Ancient Runes, not ruins.

Sounds like Pansy is enjoying her opportunity to play the Master for once. I love how surprised Luna is to the way boys are reacting to her. She's such an endearing figure and my heart always goes out to her when she's been hurt. I worry for her state of mind once Draco's through with her.

Well, I'm up to Chapter 5 and really intrigued. It's going at a nice pace, and the motivations are still believable. I confess that I find Luna a perfect sub, and I've been ruminating over my own plot bunny for her. I like that you are not making her so out there that her every other word is some unintelligible nonsense creature. She's still odd, yet entrenched in the same life and pursuits as her classmates.

Your Draco is going pretty well, too. I don't really like him much as a character and don't often read anything centered around him unless he's solely the antagonist, but here you keep him in character as an arrogant teen with a penchant for bullying without making him ridiculously cruel and malicious. And you obviously aren't going for fluff, either, which is good. I think the pair will make an interesting couple to watch. I'm very curious to see how Luna will continue to respond to Draco's commands as he pushes her further and further.

Now you're going to go and make me start up a Harry/Luna just to keep the Luna love flowing!

I'm so glad you managed to update this story! It's just gotten even more interesting, Draco is such a sneaky git! lol.

update

I'm guessing that Goyle poked that guy in the eye on Draco's orders cos he was jealous. If that's right then perhaps Draco could be worrying about losing Luna/ his power over her and steps up his game, how u would do that would of coruse be depending on what Draco really wants from Luna, whether it's all a game or he does actually want her. Or perhaps he could read her journal and find out what Pansy did to her and be very annoyed over Pansy tyring to control Luna as well, he doesn't seem the type to want to share at all. Whether he would punish Luna for obeying or Pansy for going too far would be ur choice or even have him worrying that Luna wouldn't want to contiue her "lessons" if Pansy was going to be involved and he could offer to make it up to her.
That's all I could think of at the moment, it all depends on where you want to go with the story. Hope you find inspiration soon, it's one of my fave stories on this site

please update