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I liked the way Draco treated Little Raven in the train compartment. She must learn that she is there for 'his' pleasure and sometimes that is just a show of possession (for her benefit as well as others). Finally, Luna voiced her desires to Ron and her comment on giving up soon because he was 'dense' was great. I loved that the entire group was speechless...that was PRICELESS!!!! I can't wait to see what Draco has planned for Little Raven and her new 'uniform'!?!?!? MORE, PLEASE!!!

I must admit, I squirmed A LOT in my seat as I read this chapter *shivers up and down my spine*! The build up, the punishment and the taking of 'Little Raven's' virginity was wonderfully erotic and exquisitely sensual. KUDOS!!!! All I can say now is...More, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!

I had to stop and review 'the collar'. This was such a lovely chapter. The ritual was very intricate and makes me wish that such a ritual were available in 'the muggle world'. Because I would love for MY master to be able to enact such a ritual; but definitely the non-reversible one. Simply lovely!!

Poor Luna, having to explain the 'love bites' to a teacher, especially McGonnegal!?!?!?! I don't think that we have seen the last of Ron, trying to protect Luna. Maybe he has finally noticed her and will make a move. I know that Adrian will punish Luna, the only question is how much and will Draco have to interfere *oh, I hope so*!!!! As always, More...Please!!!!!!!

Oh, her Master to the rescue!!!!! I love that Adrian did torture Luna by getting her all hot and bothered. But I can't wait to see what Draco has in mind for Adrian's punishment *wicked chuckle*! Will Luna be rewarded for withstanding Adrian's advances without giving in *wink, wink*! I am so happy that you are on a roll today. More, Please!!!!!

One - I LOVED THIS CHAPTER. I loved how Luna 'asked' that her Master be her 'first'!!! But like you said, "as if she had a choice in the matter" *wicked laugh*!!!! Second - Oh please, oh please; let us know what punishment Adrian received at Draco's hands *evil grin*! Please, please, please!!!!!

I vote for Mcgonagall. But you should publish the other viersion of the chapter alone so we can read that one to

That's a hard choice. When I read it, I heard McGonagall, and since she's a woman, it might work out better for Luna, plus she's Ron's HoH. But Snape is Adrian and Draco's HoH, so it might make more sense depending on where you are going with whatever happens next. I can see it working both ways. I guess you can put me down for McGonagall, but either way, I'll be happy.

Teacher - Snape!!!! I have just gotten caught up on this story. I am in LOVE with this story *wicked Dom Draco*!?!?!?!?! I like how Ron has now noticed and stands up for Luna. But it is too late, she is in too deep as a submissive for Draco. I can't wait to see what Draco has planned. More, Please!!!!!!

I must admit, I don't usually like such a slow build. But this one is soooo HOT!!!

I love that Draco has Luna under his spell. I hope that Luna writes in her journal about being a 'slut'. I think that Draco will be able to use that as he moves Luna to the next stage.

Can we have some more of Luna's dreams with her collar and leash on?!?!?!!? Also, when will her current boyfriend try to cross the line that Draco (Her Master) has drawn? How will she and HE be punished. I hope her boyfriend Adrian (sp) gets severely punished by Draco. Plus Pansy, needs a good spanking...maybe by Luna (only as a reward).

More, please!!!!!