rate_review Reviews

I really love this story. Can't wait for more. In response to your question, I would really like to see a Harry/Luna story. With either Luna or Harry dominant. Though I wouldn't say no to any story involving Luna as either dominant or submissive in particular. :)

OK, que the Twilight Zone (old TV series) music. Did Dancing Flower just say 'her boy'?!?!?!? I am assuming that Dancing Flower and Narcissa did not make friends. I can't wait for the next chapter. More, Please!!!!

I actually posted a request that you might like. Have you ever played Slavemaker 3? The basic concept would be harry acting like a slave trainer from the game. Think what your having Draco do in this, but once harry is done 'training' the slaves, he would then sell them.

One aspect of the game was that a slavemaker would have an assistant to help train the slaves. You could also have him keep a slave or two that he particularly liked. Finally, while he would use natural training like draco is using, he would also use drugs and the like in order to bend a slave to his will.

Check out the game for ideas, and let me know what you think.

Oh, such a naughty, naughty place. How can I get a submissive memebership?!?!?!? I so like that Draco explained the rules of the club so that Little Raven and your readers understand why Pansy was so upset. Thank you. As for Master Prince aka Severus Snape, that was only to be expected from a submissive reader. He and Lucius are always Dominates it our own personal fantasies. But who was the submissive in Master Prince's lap???? More, please!

I suspected that the girl might be Dancing Flower, but I thought she might be too young. Did/does Lucius like them young *bad boy*? Pansy is too much into herself to be an effective Mistress, but I suspect Adrian is loving being her slave!?!?! Luna is learning quickly to be a good pet. But she handles her punishments very well. I suspects that she likes her spankings. As for your writing another story...I'll read it!!! I always wanted a VERY Dark Harry to take little-miss-know-it-all Hermione in hand and teach her that being a goody-two-shoes and always following the rules, is not how the real Wizarding) world is.

Oh, bad, bad Lucius!! He definitely wants his son's new pet! Why can't he find his own? Or has Narcissa cock-hold him *what an evil thought*!! And what is the story with Dancing Flower...you have peaked my curiosity? More, Please!!!

Oh, another chapter *happy dance*. I love how Lucius looked at Luna when she arrived. Her description to Draco was PRICELESS!!! I am so glad to hear that Lucius will be a naughty Slytheran! And of course Little Raven would be expected to where Nothing. Nothing except her collar!!! I was also happy to see that Lucius turned up so soon to 'offer' his vast 'experiance'. Can I go play with him, since Draco is not inclined to offer up Little Raven *moan*??? p.s. I added this story under my profile, in the 'Currently Reading' section. I just had to share!!!!!

OK, OK, I admit it...I am a HUGE fan of this story!!!!! I really like that neither of Draco's parents really like Pansy *gold digger indeed*. Now, are you going to let us in on who 'Dancing Flower' was, or is that irrelevant? It seems to me that Lucius is a little too interested in Draco's pet *I hear spooky music playing*. Is there something in the ritual that was performed that will allow Lucius to play with Little Raven? As always, More..Please!!!!

Just catching up on the story. I've really loved all of the recent chapters and I'm happy to see another dream chapter. Excellent. But now she has a dual life so it doesn't get simpler. Still some more quidditch matches to come though. You promised all of the games up until the house cup. Will Luna make a game saving block? Will she distract Ron as keeper at the other end of the pitch?

Oh, I liked the dream. The fact that Luna felt the after affects of the spanking from the dream...that was inspirational. But since Little Raven is new to being a pet, she doesn't know what experienced pets know...pets eat at their Master's feet. More...Please!!!!