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October 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I loved the paddling. But the vibrating clip was PRICELESS!!!!! And of course Ron could NEVER take her breath away...only Master Dragon can do that. I loved the chapter...More, Please!!!
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September 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I like the little torture that Little Raven gave her Master while Narcissa was in the room. A good pet knows when to be naughty! I loved Draco's comment to Little Raven's slip during her reading. That was WONDERFUL! I can't wait to see what Master Dragon has planned for Little Raven's punishment for Luna's date with Ron *snicker*!?!?!? MORE, PLEASE!!!!
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September 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Just wondering how many more chapters we can expect in this story? I love your writing and look forward to all the updates but every good story has a arch. Where are we in this one? Keep up the good work!!!
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September 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, such a naughty Draco *Draco, keep it up*. I can see that Draco is going to have a hard time with Silvain...oh goody. A challenge always keeps Master Dragon on his toes, and the only one who will suffer (or pleasure) will be Little Raven. I loved that Little Raven discovered 'subspace' *Mmmm*! I can't wait for the next chapter...as always, more please!!!
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September 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I do like that Silvain did not reach Luna before she left *breathing a sigh of relief*, he was just too creepy, even more so than Adrian. Ron's whole demeanor and interaction with Luna in this chapter was PRICELESS!!! Loved the teasing from the twins, that just made it better. I avidly await your next chapter *chomp, chomp, chomp (on the bit)*!!!!!!
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September 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, the plot thickens. I laughed out loud at what Draco did to his mother...parading 'slaves' through the Malfoy Manor; that was brilliant!!! I love that Little Raven will be punished by Master Dragon for every time she spends with Ron!!! I will be hanging around on AFF for your next chapter. I'm impatient, that way *more chomp, chomp, chomp*!!!
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September 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, such a wonderful plot chapter. There was such intrigue (Mother AND cousin) that I (almost) didn't miss the smut *evil grin*! Now, will Draco's cousin reach Luna before she reaches her father? And the plot thickens! More, please...pretty please!!
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September 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
WHAT???? Someone called her Mama...oh my, who could that have been?!?!?!?! Poor Draco, must find Lucius a new pet (and it can't be Dancing Flower) or Master Venom, will have the opportunity to play with Little Raven!!! What a plot twist. Before I read the next chapter (46), I just have to know. Does Master Venom wish that he could have Dancing Flower back and vise versa *sappy, I know*??
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September 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you know that I LOVE you!!!! Sorry, I am late in reading. By the way, where is your beta? Paragraph two - he kissed her between her 'eyes'. But I must say that I do love a chapter devoted to smut, and I loved the Christmas 'Moaning'! More, please!!!
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September 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. Can't wait for more. In response to your question, I would really like to see a Harry/Luna story. With either Luna or Harry dominant. Though I wouldn't say no to any story involving Luna as either dominant or submissive in particular. :)