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by dweek

person Aranel
schedule October 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Luna is just a doll! Fuck, I really loved this chapter and there are tons I want to say about it and your review reply but it's 3:30something in the morning and I really should be sleep! Damn these fan fictions!
Maybe I'll get around to making a proper review later. Must sleep....
schedule October 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
First, I think you should leave the original chapters as they are. The story is moving along nicely and I think that changing them would only be a distraction for you as the writer and those of use who have come to love the story as it is *big hug*. Oh, Draco can be a right selfish bastard...but what should we expect. I love that he felt that as her Master, HE should get to see her before 'the Bitch'...only as it should be!! Oh, and I got as tingly with both his punishments before she could meet her friends *shivering*! Can't wait for more!!!!!
schedule October 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Confused...did you just edit chapter 55? I'm going through withdrawals here!!! More, Please!
person dru
schedule October 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
nothing new?!? tease
schedule October 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
First, I am glad that you are already 'hatching' the next story *happy dance*!! Oh, you and Master Dragon can be soooo sadistic. Torturing Little Raven with those evil (wonderful) little clips. And I love that Little Raven was denied the big "O" for saying No...PRICELESS
person Aranel
schedule October 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Draco, you're so mean!!
I love it.

Poor Luna, can't even be friends with Hermione without getting punished. Honestly, he is letting her be friends with it, there are just consequences.
Okay, now I'm a wee bit confused. What happened last chapter with Blaise and the punishment and all that good jazz!? I was waiting to see if Draco was going to reward her for listening so well and being so loyal. *pouts* now I'm all confused....
schedule October 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like that Draco is open about his pet to all of his perspective girlfriends/future wife. That will make life easier for Little Raven and for her to make friends or at least not enemies in the future. I was getting worried for poor Little Raven with the comments from Blaise. I am so glad that Little Raven was honest about her feelings for HER Master Dragon. Way to go Little Raven, you are such a good little pet!!! More, Please!! p.s. I will be VERY sad *getting misty eyed* when this story is done:(
schedule October 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ron was wicked to make Luna agree that they would be boyfriend and girlfriend if Slytheran won...talk about lack of confidence. Adrian is definitely dreaming if he thinks Draco is going to let him anywhere near Luna, ever again. And is Tracy wanting to try out for pet status? Because she won't hold a candle to Little Raven!!! I loved the torture in the common room. But especially the punishment in the dorm *breathing heavily*!!!! More, Please!!!!!
person Aranel
schedule October 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Luna did so good! Her love for her master is so sweet, but sadly divided. I wish she would move past Ron. Poor guy never gets a happy ending. He is just such an easy target. Like Charlie Brown, nice but never going anywhere in life.
Draco however is pissed as hell! Sixty spanks! He really hates sharing. Spoiled child. Love it.
person Aranel
schedule October 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Whelp....
I just read through all fifty some chapters. Now what am I gonna do with my life?
I like where this is going. Kinda rooting for Ron which, if there is anything to know about my Harry Potter fandom, is not the norm. Usually I can't stand the hot headed, jealous, oblivious, selfish, ignoramus of a ginger but in this story he is kinda sweet. Luna is one of my favorite characters in the HP universe. She is just so open and honest with herself. Can't wait to see what new heights Draco baby takes her to.