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by dweek

schedule August 1, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Loved it!! Hope the ending means Draco is Luna's boyfriend as well as Little Raven's Master...

person LightDesires
schedule October 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm usually a BIG Dramione shipper but I have to say I can see this story becoming a guilty pleasure! Loved it
person Paige Luna
schedule August 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I read all 60 chapters! It is very well written. I can not wait for the squeal.
person Aranel
schedule October 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well the escalated quickly.
Don't quite know what to think.
Might have to wait for the sequel to see where this is going.
schedule October 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just finished chapter 59 and wanted to review before the "last one" *sob*. I DID enjoy Little Raven's punishment...she finds it so easy to get into 'sub-space'; I envy her that. And I did LOVE that Master Dragon had as much difficulty being without his pet for two week. Even Masters must suffer too!!!
schedule October 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
First, I am VERY SAD that this story is over...but all things must come to an end; even good things. Secondly, I LOVED that Hermione understood the significance of the 'wizard's collar' *snicker*! I love that Master Dragon is planning to keep Little Raven and that she in turn wants to stay!! While I am sorry that this story is over, I am glad that you finished it before November 1st. Because I will probably get very little reading done during the month of November, as I will be writing my own novel for the National Novel Writing Month (NaNoWrMo). I am VERY nervous about it, so if you want to cheer me up from time to time, email me at eclectic_pet@yahoo.com and let me know if you have posted an update for Smell of Submission and I'll try to sneak in a read and a review.
person Anon
schedule October 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
hope ron get his own slave luna or hermoine there are a few other, but if ron finds out he my just kill draco, he stood up to sirus and date him to kill him to get to harry, he would not even be close to afraid of draco
schedule October 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I DID enjoy Little Raven's first round of punishment. I knew that leash attached to her bedpost would come up again *happy dance*!! I also like that she had to be a kitty (pet); too bad Tracey doesn't know about the accessories that muggles have found for the tail and ears *ROFL*. I can not wait to see how Little Raven handles two weeks without contact!?!?!?! More, Please!!
schedule October 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I don't think Tracey is going to get exactly what she is hoping for...but she will get used hard *snicker*. I want to feel sorry for Little Raven's upcoming punishment; but I just can't. She will have to face her Master soon and she may not be sitting for a long time *snicker*! More, Please!!!!! BTW, I WOULD read your original stuff.
person Aranel
schedule October 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good job Tracy! She should be proud of how well she took Draco's anger. Ron's gonna lose his hands but Tracy did well. Honestly, what was Luna thinking? Draco is gonna tear that ass up... Might accidentally scare Luna off. Oh dear...