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May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I felt like a lot of the conversation was forced, didn't sound natural at all. Try allowing it to deviate from where you want it to go, you can always bring it back later.
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May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry! Soooo need chapter 10!!!
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May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You left it THERE??? Why did you have to leave it THERE??? AHH!!!
Oh, and could you send me an imaginary friend, please... I need one right now!
Great story! Can't wait to see Harry realizing (or being told) that his 'letter lover' is none other than Draco Malfoy!
Oh, and could you send me an imaginary friend, please... I need one right now!
Great story! Can't wait to see Harry realizing (or being told) that his 'letter lover' is none other than Draco Malfoy!
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May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nooo! BAD Harry. Liz needs to get laid, too! ;_; Leave her be!
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May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Le Gasp!
I love it!
Harry is so interesting XD
And so is Lada!
So is Draco for that matter...
So, forgive my fan-girl squeal.
I love it!
Harry is so interesting XD
And so is Lada!
So is Draco for that matter...
So, forgive my fan-girl squeal.
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May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oooooh!!!!!!!!
more, 'more', MORE!!!!!
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(ew, that sounds perverted.... O.O)
*giggle*
anyway! god i wish you'd update again soon!
that was brilliant!
so many twists and turns!!
glad that harry finally admitted to himself that he might like
guys though.
i hope harry soon realizes who the writer of his letters are...
hope liz and george become happy together : )
what a cliffy too...
hahahaha
looking forward to the next chapter!!!!!!
more, 'more', MORE!!!!!
................................................
(ew, that sounds perverted.... O.O)
*giggle*
anyway! god i wish you'd update again soon!
that was brilliant!
so many twists and turns!!
glad that harry finally admitted to himself that he might like
guys though.
i hope harry soon realizes who the writer of his letters are...
hope liz and george become happy together : )
what a cliffy too...
hahahaha
looking forward to the next chapter!!!!!!
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April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. Please update once more when you can!
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April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i haven't read a good harry/draco story in like forever! update soon *kisses*
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April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 9!!!!! I think Draco is in shock!!!!
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March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fine...no angry mob this time. Just wanted to stop by and say awesome story so far...very intricat. Usually I don't really like new characters...but I really like Lada/Liz! Shes fantastic! Anyways, looking forward to the next chappy.