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for Broken Moon

by DarkCyanStar

person alma
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A very good start.
person Vex
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please, please! I need more. You've made a fscking awesome world and I can't wait to read more.
Congrats on leading up to some fun dramatic events.
person shadygrl
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, poor Harry -- so much has changed of the world he's known.

Eeek, I hope Cho doesn't get punished too much.
person Aalto
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting... I have quite a good feeling of this story. I hope you'll continue writing it. If you need any help with the story os 'summat, I'll available.

You can reach me at varjoratsu84@luukku.com

Hoping for an update soon!
person qwerty
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
VERY interesting. I'm looking forward to reading more.
update
person bunny
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey nice story keep it going
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How sad! I love the reality though. This is... Wow. I don't even have the words to describe this really. It's amazing! That James is a werewolf too is cool. I love Sirius/Remus. Albus being Alpha was ingenious! Fenrir taking over hurts Harry now, but to find out that he's Harry's mate, his Dominant mate, will just about kill him. Especially since he seems to be a dominant, heterosexual man. Wow. I can't wait to read more about this. This is just amazing and I love it. ~dpa06~
person Alfsigr
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
gasp, that was so good. I can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good.
person Extraho
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh you better finish this. it has a new take on things that i lve. i wonder how harry will take fenrir living in his room, or being his mate. siri, rem, and his parents were idiots or talking shit about him so much when they knew he was their sons mate.. it only makes it harder for harry. keep it up. i love it.