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i just added you to my favorites list!

*Squeak..*

o.o.. Update.. Soon. Please!! O.O

CAN YOU FRIGGING UPDATE ALREADY?! ITS BEEN LIke FOREVER. EITHER CONTINUE THE STORY OR dROP iT BUT DONT LEAVE EVeryONE WAITING

Me like-e a lot!

MOAR!!!
O_O
Please? I can't wait to see Fenrir totally dom Harry XD

This is a good story but you could update a bit more often.

I love all your story, espacially when poor Harry can't help but strugle with Fenrir.

Well....where's the next chapter?! *looks eager* ::MV::

Again, great chapter. Can't wait for another chapter

Oh so perfect! I loved it, I love the story altogether. This is just... Wow! I think this was an amazing piece with great angst and feeling in it. I like that you left off the first chapter and began the second chapter with the same thing: Albus' passing and burning. I like Harry's thoughts of running, of becoming a Lone. I like that he was able to get one up on Fenrir, even though Fenrir won in the end. I think the comment about the sheets was brill, and the bite mark on the neck not healing was perfect. He managed to keep screwing around with Cho a secret from his mum? Way to go Harry! But now Fenrir and Harry are going hunting... and possibly "hunting". That will be a hell of a third chapter. I'm sure Cho, Ron, and Lavender are wondering what in the bloody hell is going on. I mean: new Alpha, he calls them out on having unmated sex, threatens Cho to leave Harry alone, then says he's going out hunting with Harry when those three know damn well that they don't just hunt on these trips. They screw like animals! And Fenrir has insinuated... hell all but shouted it at a town meeting! I'm excited for the rest of the fic, really. Great job writing. ~dpa06~