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for Broken Moon

by DarkCyanStar

person Hajime
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow hot fuck scene...anyway update more more more1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person sneakysgirl
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG. I LOOOVE IIIITTTT. CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE. PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOON!
person Rokkis
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah... that ending was almost too cute. But, must admit that I am scared for the pack. I mean, one can't just up and leave and travel to south america!! And what about dangerous animals (well... that may not actually be a problem) and poisons (how are werewolf immune systems?) and the natives? And immigration!!

Anyway, liked that lemon!
Can't wait to read mums reaction!!

Cheers!
person Extraho
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was HOT! i like the feisty vesion of the couple, definetly. i hope Harry get's to top at some point...... *hint hint*

~ extraho
person ella1331
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As always wonderful!
person qwerty
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!
update
person Risatine
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First of all I have to say, awesome chapter to a very exciting story. I
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OmGosh-B-tooties.
Im dieing here....what is this, a week of cliff-hangers galore.
Someone has it out for me...letting me read, damn good fics and than leave me hanging.
Theres got to be more to this - please say there is.
I cant wait to read more.

...and loved that it was a long chapter.
person Pimpshit
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooh...*sigh* as always as is expected of someone with your talented writing, this was excellent! ^u^ keep it up!
person Matt
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're evil.

Every story has so much suspense.