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March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ugh you shouldnt have made it that Lily was pregnant again....
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March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it!! you did say at the beginning that this is short story, so i dont see it goes fast ^^
anyway could you update the other story of yours? i really liked that one as well ^^
anyway could you update the other story of yours? i really liked that one as well ^^
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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know, I think your the first Fenrir/Harry writer that has written Fenrir being the submissive partner while having sex...
Good job ;)
Good job ;)
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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Seme!Harry doesn't do it for me but whatever. Great story anyway. Now I'm off to read something else to get the slightly bad taste of top!Harry out of my mouth. No offense to you as a writer or anything pertaining to this story being bad, which it isn't - quite lovely, really - but I hate to see Harry topping people so much bigger than him. To me it doesn't seem realistic enough.
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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, it was fast, but you did warn us. I enjoyed every second of it. A sequel would be perfect, but you'll be the one writing it so it's up to you. I loved this chapter, loved that they still have problems even though they're in this new, perfect place. Predators, Riddle and his pack, Harry wanting to dominate. Which, by the way, was amazing! I like the 'reality' of it, without it being corny. And I loved that Lily was expecting again. A great way to end the fic. Very well done. ~dpa06~
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March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... I'm not sure I like Harry topping Ferir (okay, I lie. I am very sure I don't like Harry topping Fenrir), but it was interesting nonetheless. This piece finished on a very nice note and seems to be different to the other stuff you've written for Harry/Fenrir. Their relationship dynamic is completely different, well, I liked reading this anyway. Oh god, this looks a bit pathetic. lol I am reeeeeeeeeaaaaaaallly tired so none of this probably makes any sense. (Sigh) I'll stop now. v_v;;;
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March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do hope you decide to make a sequel. I truly loved it! It just sounds and feels like there is more to it. For starters there's the whole Riddle thing-y, what's he going to do? Will he attach soon? Will he try to take Harry by force? What is his true role in this story?...
Jan ^_~
Jan ^_~
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March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story. I loved Harry as Little Alpha!
Sequel! Sequel!
Great job!
Sequel! Sequel!
Great job!
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March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very, very hot!!! absolutely loving it.
please, please, please email me when you update:
no1wag@hotmail.com
please, please, please email me when you update:
no1wag@hotmail.com
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gasp...Im wordless, totally.
Well done.
Well done.