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for Broken Moon

by DarkCyanStar

person Sara
schedule February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I can honestly say that I would never have thought of a story like this! Plus, you get kudos in my book for doing it with a rare--and awesome--couple. And what you did with Tom Riddle? Genius. Pure genius. I really hope to read more from you soon.
person Night
schedule October 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story, but I'm wondering what happened to the other one you had written. the non-magical one. Under the stars...something like that..I would love to read it again too, do you still have it somewhere?
person Elfin
schedule September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to tell you that I absolutely love your fics on this and on FF.com. I hope that you will not let stupid people get you down about your writing and will continue to write and post.

If you post again, could you please email me and let me know since I have followed all your writing.

Thanks,
Elfin
schedule May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ew. harry tops fenrir greyback. that's sick. warn us next time!
person Felinity
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol love the story, just how i imagined it should be with greyback and harry :)
great job
person kunitsu
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooh that was just nice and that part where Fenrir thought Harry was dead was just mean, I really thought Harry had died. If you are going to make a sequel that thing with Riddle would be a wonderful plot, I found it fitting that he still has an obsession with Harry.
person Hazel
schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM

yummy, yummy I love bananas
person star101
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The story was short, but in a good way. You have to write a sequel. You can't just leave off with what happened with Riddle and his pack. Have Harry and Fenrir go through another trial. Maybe they'll find a cub to adopt. Something else should happen after this story. If you do decide to write a sequel, let me know so I may read it when you post it.
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome all the way through. Nice ending, too :) ::MV::
person Anon
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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