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August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is quite nice for a first femslash and a first lemon. :D Well written.
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August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, by the way for the reviewers who don't seem to get it: you totally feel the difference between water and a woman's sexual juices (even when in water). The latter is somewhat more, well... slimey. It doesn't wash away so easily at all either. Try it, if you don't believe me.
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December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was hot. =D I say you should write at least one more chapter. Maybe Harry or Ron catching them in the act. ;D Peace, Raven.
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November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow!
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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was...really really good. You really captured the characters true personalities, and I love your vocabulary; you never cease to constantly change the way they interact with eachother. Really keeps the mind interested ;). Truly superb writing. I hope you have more in you cause I'd love for this to continue. Oh, yea, it was really really hot too. xD
Please write more!
<3
Please write more!
<3
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June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story, but some of it doesn't make sense. There pussys would be wet, but there in water, so wouldn't it just wash off after they sat down, so how would they feel "jucies" from previous orgasims, if it washed off?
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February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was hot, but umm... Playing in a hot tub you cant really tell the difference between having a good time and "You're so fucking wet"
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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I never, but damn, makes me wanna!
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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that was really hot!
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January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I usually don't like fem slash..but this was hot : ) I liked it a lot.